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  1. # gg's Hyouka - 01
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  3. Dialogue: 0,0:00:05.94,0:00:09.06,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,If I asked you to describe high school life, you'd think of a rose color,
  4. Dialogue: 0,0:00:09.06,0:00:11.32,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,and for a rose color, you'd think of high school life.
  5. Dialogue: 0,0:00:12.15,0:00:17.84,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,In the eyes of society, high school life is always glorified like the rose color.
  6. Dialogue: 0,0:00:18.58,0:00:25.29,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Still, I don't think all high schoolers look forward to a rose-colored life.
  7. # Most retarded translation known to dolphins. Rose-colored in English != rose-colored in Japanese.
  8.  
  9. Dialogue: 0,0:00:33.80,0:00:38.47,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Maybe there are students who prefer the gray color.
  10. # lol
  11.  
  12. Dialogue: 0,0:01:09.28,0:01:11.17,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Basically, your motto is...
  13. Dialogue: 0,0:01:13.10,0:01:15.83,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I won't bother doing things I don't have to,
  14. Dialogue: 0,0:01:15.83,0:01:18.26,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,and I'll just rush through the things I have to do.
  15. # Shitty translation of his motto.
  16.  
  17. Dialogue: 0,0:02:21.36,0:02:23.17,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Aikido and police combat technique.
  18. # >Police combat technique
  19. # Kill yourself
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  21. Dialogue: 0,0:05:54.33,0:05:59.42,Sign,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fad(1224,0)\fs36\bord0.7\blur3\b1\clip(559,550,1148,599)\t(4570,5029,\clip(1148,529,1148,599))\fnKozuka Mincho Pro-Hyouka B\pos(871,570)}Revival of the Long-Running Book Club
  22. # You can't revive something that's already long running? Why not "esteemed" or "reputable"?
  23.  
  24. Dialogue: 0,0:08:23.22,0:08:25.87,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I didn't want to barge in on your secret date,
  25. # Shitty word choice. Sasuga gg.
  26.  
  27. Dialogue: 0,0:09:08.62,0:09:11.82,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,but The Four Great Tenfold Families are pretty famous.
  28. Dialogue: 0,0:09:19.20,0:09:22.14,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,The first character of their names increases tenfold,
  29. Dialogue: 0,0:09:22.14,0:09:24.53,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,so they're known as The Four Great Tenfold Families.
  30. # The shittiest translation out of the three. Everyone should just use Mazui's TL - "rising powers."
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  32. Dialogue: 0,0:09:46.28,0:09:50.95,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I used to see her name in the \Nprefecture's top mock exam scorers.
  33. # More shitty phrasing. Yeah, let's pick barely more accurate where it doesn't even matter.
  34.  
  35. Dialogue: 0,0:12:15.75,0:12:18.55,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,What happened here is probably being reenacted downstairs.
  36. # Bad word choice again. It's like gg and Mazui don't know what dictionaries are.
  37.  
  38. Dialogue: 0,0:12:53.03,0:12:54.92,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,That's how you knew it was an electrician...
  39. # Electrician? You sure?
  40.  
  41. Dialogue: 0,0:13:39.37,0:13:42.75,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I'm going to have to two-time with General Affairs Committee, but...
  42. # Wrong.
  43.  
  44. Dialogue: 0,0:13:46.34,0:13:48.72,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He already filled the sign up sheet.
  45. # Please use a dictionary.
  46.  
  47. Dialogue: 0,0:15:33.71,0:15:35.74,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Her body was soft like an invertebrate.
  48. # Really? Shit translation.
  49.  
  50. Dialogue: 0,0:15:35.74,0:15:40.37,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Her eyes were a bloodshot red as she stared from the side!
  51. # Yes, let's give A+ to a group that is INCAPABLE OF USING A FUCKING DICTIONARY.
  52.  
  53. Dialogue: 0,0:16:27.34,0:16:31.47,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,The question is, how many days it'll take to reach my class, 1-D?
  54. # it'll > will it
  55.  
  56. Dialogue: 0,0:16:42.35,0:16:45.73,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,By "number two of the Seven Mysteries," you mean there's a number one too, right?
  57. # >one too
  58. # Fantastic. The sentence is also just poorly phrased.
  59.  
  60. Dialogue: 0,0:17:27.23,0:17:30.03,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Tell her, Satoshi.
  61. Dialogue: 0,0:17:30.98,0:17:35.19,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Okay, please listen to the secret club's story.
  62. # More shitty phrasing by gg. It's almost like Dark_Sage is onto something...
  63.  
  64. Dialogue: 0,0:17:39.78,0:17:42.54,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,We have many clubs in Kamiyama High,
  65. Dialogue: 0,0:17:42.54,0:17:46.30,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,so we obviously have too many recruitment posters.
  66. # -too
  67. # That's not the obvious conclusion one would draw from the first clause. It's more like "... so we obviously have a lot of recruitment posters as well."
  68.  
  69. Dialogue: 0,0:17:37.65,0:17:39.78,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I heard about it at a General Affairs Committee meeting.
  70. Dialogue: 0,0:18:06.68,0:18:10.17,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It seems there's a secret club that even the \NGeneral Affairs Committee doesn't know of,
  71. # HURRDURR.
  72.  
  73. Dialogue: 0,0:18:22.74,0:18:26.15,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Tanabe, our upperclassman and executive committee,
  74. # lol
  75.  
  76. Dialogue: 0,0:18:17.90,0:18:18.86,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Under the name...
  77. Dialogue: 0,0:18:18.86,0:18:20.87,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Black Widow Society.
  78. # +The
  79. # Makes the club name sound less retarded. See:
  80. Dialogue: 0,0:18:43.14,0:18:46.31,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,"I was the president of the Black Widow Society.
  81.  
  82. Dialogue: 0,0:19:35.82,0:19:37.98,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I'd post it on the bulletin board by the corner of the building,
  83. Dialogue: 0,0:19:37.98,0:19:40.24,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,where it doesn't stand out much.
  84. # doesn't > wouldn't
  85. # Nuance -1.
  86.  
  87. Dialogue: 0,0:20:24.61,0:20:28.19,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,This is the first bulletin board that the freshmen are going to see.
  88. # Nitpicky at this point, but "that" reduces the flow of the line. But who cares because gg is accurate more "accurate" with insignificant phrasing, right?
  89.  
  90. Dialogue: 0,0:22:10.87,0:22:12.10,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I'll try remember that.
  91. # A+ QC
  92. # Commie accidentally a word too, but it was surprisingly subtle. Lucky them.
  93.  
  94. Dialogue: 0,0:24:14.92,0:24:18.09,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,You've only delayed the present situation.
  95. # Delayed... what? So stupid. It's more like "You're just delaying the inevitable" ... or something.
  96.  
  97. Dialogue: 0,0:25:34.76,0:25:40.92,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Next week: "Activities of the Glorious Book Club."
  98. # Next Week: "You find out you're an idiot for calling it the Book Club!"
  99.  
  100. # Not even going to go through the problems with punctuation.
  101. # A++++
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