Interesting, this batch is both the best done and the one that needs most redo's so far. I like the sarcasm and empathetic voice that you did.

DA07__00384F83_1: Oh, damn. Naturally.
"Naturally" should be spoken in a flat tone.

DA07__00384F85_1: Betray you? We're only giving you what you deserve, demon!
"Demon" should be spoken with stronger hatred.

DialogueWinterholdCollege__000C81E6_1: So the Psijic Order is gone, but they still haven't shown us what is "physics".
Should read "physics" instead of "psychics". It's a reference to the vanilla mispronunciation of "Psijics".

DLC1VQ03Hunter__0039E563_1: Were you ever so resourceful, leader of the Dawnguard.
This line is sarcastic.

DLC1VQ04RNPC__003A36BB_1: Secret passages, secret passages everywhere.
He was annoyed by the secret passages.

DLC1VQ07RNPC__003A36C5_1: By the Eagle - look at this place! I am... Speechless.
He stood in awe in the Forgotten Vale.

DLC2MQ04__003EF7BD_1: Ha. No, it's because you basically contributed less than 20 percent in this trip.
Not a problem in this line, I simply like how you did this line and want to let you know about it.

MQ206__000217A0_1: Do it now! Shout Alduin down to the earth! We will end him once and for all! Now! Now! Now!
Should read "shout" instead of "shoot".

MQ206__000217A3_1: What the fuck are you waiting for! Shout him down!
Same as above.