Eternal_Horizon

Deny Reason

Jul 23rd, 2019 (edited)
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  1. The GM Team has come to the decision that your character will be denied and must be rewritten as to remove any mention of Hallownest. First off, you've proven yourself incapable of adapting Hollow Knight game ideas to the Undertale world properly as your edits to Hallownest and its lore were not adaptations but just small edits (Albeit it is our fault that we let them slide). Secondly, you've undeniably lied to us within your submission.
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  3. `Ancestry: In the Glorious Kingdom of Hallownest, the even more Glorious Tribe of the Mantis is in the War fighting both the buglike Monsters from east their Village, and the mindless but strong beasts from West their Village. These War lead to Military Structures in the proud Tribe of the Mantis, including the leadership under three Sisters, the Best Warriors of the Tribe, the Mantis Lords.
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  5. ADDITIONALLY: There is no Radiation/Infektion whatsoever, Its just a War as stated absove.`
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  7. This was copied directly from an older version of Discard's application. You had claimed that there was no Radiance or Infection, however, your recent submissions contradict this through the addition of the 'disease' *And notably the 'additionally' line is missing from the recent submissions* which obviously hint towards *some* relation with the Radiance/Infection. Lastly, you've proven yourself incapable of properly handling the disease mechanic you were attempting to integrate. From your defense of the concept, it was something you either A. Haven't thought out or B. Haphazardly adapted to add 'conflict'. Quoting you again:
  8. `He isn't mad, but he doesn't want to loose higher thoughts. So there is reasoning for what he does. Hope I could explain why my charakter isn't a "I attack everything in sight" person.`
  9. What your character *would* do if they had this disease mechanic is they'd be killing random characters to maintain their livelihood or, otherwise, kill for the sake of killing after degrading. So with that addition, it'd make your character into a constant "threat" and, as it would stand, civilization wouldn't let such a constant "threat" be loose. All in all, if you want a Hollow Knight-like character, it is fine, however obvious and explicit relations to Hallownest or Hollow Knight game mechanics (Such as soul) are to be avoided.
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