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  1. [b]Spring Breeze[/b]
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  4. [b]Misure's Insane[/b]
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  6. 00:10:509 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing seems a bit too big imo... making it similar to the previous spacings makes more sense.
  7. 00:12:410 (4) - 04:05:437 (3,4) - ^ etc...
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  9. 00:37:762 - There is a pretty clear piano note here, why not follow it?
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  11. 00:52:761 (1,2) - This rhythm seems a bit weird xP lots of strong beats on slider ends
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  13. 01:21:072 (5,1) - Spacing here is a bit low too.
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  15. 02:29:100 (1,2) - And here, the spacing is quite drastic. Maybe better to make it smaller, more in line with the kiai jumps xP
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  17. 03:36:706 (1,2) - Spacing seems a bit low here for how climatic the vocals are imo.
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  19. 03:49:382 (3) - Sounds like it should be a triple from your hitsounding
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  21. 03:58:889 (2) - Triple here?
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  24. Maybe end the ending spinner where everyone else did?
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  26. [b]Akitoshi's Hard[/b]
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  28. 00:57:198 (4) - Sounds like 3 1/2 notes to me.
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  30. 02:21:706 (4,5) - Shouldn't this be stacked? According to what you do with this sound.
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  32. 02:46:001 - It may be good to have a break here till 02:52:762 (1) - since 3 minutes straight of playing would be pretty straining...
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  34. 02:57:832 (1,2) - The rhythm here isn't very clear; what are you trying to follow?
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  36. [b]Mentai's Normal[/b]
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  38. 00:02:058 (4,2) - Any way you could blanket these? xP they look very close together
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  40. 00:27:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Seems like a random chain of 1/2 gaps, you could remove some to make it less of a diff spike, especially considering how the kiais are mapped...
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  42. 01:04:382 - Conversely, maybe add a circle here to make the kiai different density from the rest of the map? xP
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  44. 01:53:607 (1,2,3,4) - Again, seems like a large chain of 1/2 gaps which makes a big difficulty spike imo...
  45. 03:05:227 (2,3,1,2) - ^ etc. Try to stick to making the kiais these dense
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  47. http://puu.sh/wW8bu/1bd71c4625.jpg Pretty cool how one of them is white and one is black xP
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  49. 02:40:508 (3) - Did something go wrong with your sampleset here? Try normal
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  51. 03:51:917 (1) - This spinner kind of ends randomly; why not put it at 03:53:607 - or 03:54:875 - to follow the section / vocals?
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  55. Let me know when you're ready!
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