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 					Blue Sand Sound
 
-I called Rafatalia, Firo and Rishia to test something.
+I called Rafatalia, Firo and Rishia to test something out.
-I plan studying magic after this, but that can wait.
+I was planing on studying magic after this, but that can wait.
 
-"Naofumi, what happen?" (Rafatalia)
+"Naofumi, what is it?" (Rafatalia)
 "I have something to ask of you, Rafatalia" (Naofumi)
 
-I remove the slave limiter preventing Rafatalia from attacking me.
+I removed the slave limiter preventing Rafatalia from attacking me.
-I do this prior to the test because she will suffer due to the slave crest if I don't.
+I did this prior to the test because she will suffer due to the slave crest if I don't.
 
-"I wanted to test the defense on the shield I've upgraded. I gave you permission to hit me." (Naofumi)
+"I wanted to test the defense of the shield I've upgraded. You have my permission to hit me." (Naofumi)
 "Huh...." (Rafatalia)
 "Try bare-handed first. Don't hold back." (Naofumi)
 "I see." (Rafatalia)
 
 While hesitant, Rafatalia hits my chest with great force.
 The impact let out a loud sound.
-But i felt no pain, only a sentation as if bitten by a mosquito.
+But i felt no pain, only a sensation as if bitten by a mosquito.
 Was this the extent of Rafatalia's fist......
-How would it turn out if i was struck by a sword?
+How would it turn out if I was struck by a sword?
-Though it may be foolish, and it would be unpleasant to get wounded, I want to test out how much i can endure.
+Though it may be foolish, and it would be unpleasant to get wounded, I want to test out how much damage i can endure.
 
 "Lets use a sword next" (Naofumi)
 "Oh, that. Are you sure?" (Rishia)
 
 Rishia asks fearfully.
-I understand her feelings. If you look at it from an ordinary person's view, this doesn't look normal.
+I understand her feelings. If you look at it from an ordinary person's point of view, this doesn't look normal.
 
-"I'm trying to see how much i can withstand" (Naofumi)
+"I'm trying to see how much damage I can withstand" (Naofumi)
 
-If i can endure one of Rafatalia's attacks, I feel I'd be fine for the moment.
+If I can endure one of Rafatalia's attacks, I feel I'd be fine for the moment.
-I do not know how high my defense is, or if it's better.
+I do not know how high my defense is, or if it's better. <ED: I'll leave it like that>
 
-"Here i go" (Rafatalia)
+"Here I go" (Rafatalia)
 
-Rafatalis swings her sword at me with without serious intent, I can tell she held back somewhat.
+Rafatalia swings her sword at me with without serious intent, I can tell that, she held back somewhat.
 A light sound is made as it hits my shoulder.
 
-"This is hard...." (Rafatalia)
+"It is hard...." (Rafatalia)
 
 Rafatalia says in a tearful voice as she drops the Iron sword in her hand.
-I did not recieve any damage.
+I did not receive any damage.
 This is amazing, It's as if my body has become metal.
 My body is normal meat and flesh when i touch it.
 
-Did i gain more muscle since coming to this world?
+Did I gain more muscle since coming to this world?
-Including Lvs I feel this body has become on suitable for fighting.
+Including levels I feel this body has become suitable for fighting.
-Well i have been involved in a lot of fighting these 4 months.
+Well I have been involved in a lot of fighting in these past 4 months.
-Well i use more physical strength like in older times where one got around by foot or carriage. Can't even compare to
+Well I use more physical strength like in older times, where one got around by foot or carriage. It can't even compare to the time when I was a neet.
 
-the time when I was a geek.
+
 "Oh, good." (Naofumi)
 "Yay!" (Firo)
 
 I unchecked Firo's demon crest.
 I'll know I have great defense if I can block one of Firo's attacks, I want to know.
-I uncheck Firo's demon crest.
+
-I'll know i have great defense if i block one of Firo's attacks, I want to know.
+"Well then, let's go" (Naofumi)
 
- "Well then, let's go" (Naofumi?)
+
 Mississauga Mishimishimishi ...... ...... ...... Biki.[TL: this is onomatopoeia explained soon]
 
 "Wh, what is....." (Rishia) [ED: well she didn't had any dialogs, lets not make her lonely]
 
-"Wh, what is....." (???)
+
 From past experiences I can tell that, this is dangerous.
 
-Past experiences can tell me. This is dangerous.
+
 
 "It stopped"(Rafatalia)
 "Yes!"(Firo)
-"It stopped"(Naofumi?)
+
 I ready my shield at once.
 With a roar, vibrations are felt. A shock runs through my whole body.
 
 "Are you trying to kill him!"(Rafatalia)
 
-"You trying to kill!"
+I may have been taken back if I didn't prepare myself for this.
 With a smile I gaze over at Firo, I can't complain.
-I may have been taken back if i didn't prepare myself. For this.
+
-With a smile i gaze over at Firo, i can't complain.
+
 "Wow, master is really sturdy" (Firo)
 "What was that kick just now!" (Naofumi)
 "Well, it's a kick using all my power, It can't be used in real battle though" (Firo)
 
-"Well, it's a kick using all the power, can't be used in real battle" (Firo?)
+
 
 "I used power as if kicking the Spear guy" (Firo)
 
-"I use power as if kicking the Spear guy" (Firo)
+
 I feel like watching that a little also.
 
 "Want to go flying into the horizon?" (Firo)
 "You, think a little more about your actions!" (Rafatalia)
-"Want to go flying into the horizon?" (Firo?)
+
-"You, think a little more about your actions!" (Naofumi?)
+No, I'll definitely be killed.
 I Wonder about the kick that would send you into the horizon.
-No, I'll definately be killed.
+Or into a different world..... if you think of it, It is like an anime.
-Wonder if the kick would send you into the horizon.
+
-Or into a different world..... if you think of it like an anime.
+
 I was able to prevent all of Firo's power, which is comparable to Glass.
 I do not know how much stronger, but i can anticipate further effects.
 
 "Hmm...... Alright"(Firo)
 "That's not for you to decide, it's for me. Well I think that's OK"(Naofumi)
-"Hmm......Alright"
+
-"That's not for you to decide, it's for me"
+
-"Well i think that's ok"
+
 
 "Well it's OK..... no one was injured... so let's go back for tonight" (Naofumi)
 "Umm" (Rishia)
 
-"Well it's ok..... no one was injured... so let's go back for tonight" (Naofumi)
+
 
 "Eh?" (Rishia)
 "You don't need to do it, you are good." (Naofumi)
 "Y, Yes" (Rishia)
 
 I was not damaged by Firo, or Rafatalia. It would be impossible for Rishia if she tried.
 It would be bad to strain oneself.
 Though it feels like she has frail health, it is a defeat if it minds it.
-I was not damaged by Firo, or Rafatalia. It would be impossible if Rishia tried.
+
 "Since the next wave is near. Train you magic for today" (Naofumi)
 
 You should raise your level in earnest.
 Though Rafatalia seems to do simulation exercises with the knights.
 
 "Yes"
 "I understand"
 "I'll go study with Firo and Mel-chan"
 "Let's go like that."
 
-"I'll go study with Firo and Mel chan"
+
 Now that Bitch has been deprived of her inheritance rights, what such thing do you need as the next queen.
 Maybe Monarch studies? There was a similar thing in my world.
 It may be said that she studies every day and make it the utmost proper country.
 Speaking of Melty, if I find spare time while being taught compounding and magic, I go to her place.
 Studying with Firo can also be fun.
 ........Let's forget how I complained about being caught up with Firo while studying a few days ago.
-Speaking of Melty, if i find spare time while being taught compounding and magic, i go to my place.
+
 
-........Let's forget how i complained about being caught up with Firo while studying a few days ago.
+Now that I have to time to myself, I think I'll strengthen...... the Wrath Shield for the time being.
 
 Wrath shield Ⅲ (awakened) +7 50/50 SR
-Now that i have to time to myself, i think I'll strengthen...... the Wrath Shield for the time being.
+
 Ability unsealed ...... equipment bonus, Skill [Change shield (attack),] [Iron Maiden] [Blutopfer]
 Special Effect: Dark Curse Burning S, Strength UP, Super( orMighty) Dragon's Rage, Roar, Frenzy of Companions,
 Magic Sharing, Clothing of Anger (medium).
 Proficiency 0
 
 It seems the shield can't preform item, spirit and status enchantments.
 Still it's abilities improved tremendously.
 The problem is, that the moment I switched to this shield, It started trying to take over my consciousness, a fearsome
-I seems the shield can't preform item, spirit and status enchantments.
+
-Still it's abilities imporved tremendously.
+
-The problem is, that the moment i switched to this it started trying to take over my consciousness, a fearsome
+
 Preparations for the wave are coming along well.
 
 The next day.
-Preperations for the wave are coming along well.
+
 
 "Queen Speaking"[Knight?]
 "What? "(Naofumi?)
 
 After lunch a meeting with the queen was hailed.
 Preparations are almost done, we just wait for the wave.
 As expected, it would be severe to fight against Glass with only us.
 Which is why we gathered the heroes now, but who knows if they'll listen.
-Preperations are almost done, then just wait for the wave.
+
-As is expected, it would be severe to fight against Glass with only us.
+
 "Heroes, except Iwatani, participated in the wave of other countries between these few days and seem to have let you suppress it safely. Iwatani is alright....it isn't a big problem treating our country exclusively."(Queen)
 ""I'm anxious to say its a big problem but - Tsu!?"(Naofumi?)
 
-"Heroes, except Iwatani, participated in the wave of other countries between these few days and seem to have let
+
 A big shock shook our heads.
-you suppress it safely. Iwatani is alright....it isn't a big problem treating our country exclusively."(Queen)
+The sound was similar to the Wave starting, but it was..... delicately different.
 
 "....Something happened just now"
 "?"
 
-The sound was similar to the Wave starting, but it was.....delicately different.
+
 Although I thought I was transferred to the wave's location, I didn't go anywhere, I was still in the castle hallway.
 
 "What happened?"(???)
 "I don't know...but something just happened that is certain"(Naofumi)
 
-Althought i though i was trasnferred to the wave, I didn't go anywhere, I was still in the castle hallway.
+I call the icon of a red hourglass to check the wave in the corner field of my view.
 The timer had stopped at 3 days.
 Next to it another icon appears..... a blue hourglass with a "7" engraved into it.
 
 "Another hourglass has appeared, with a 7 engraved into it, but i don't know what this means" (Naofumi)
-The call the icon of a red hourglass to check the wave in the corner field of my view.
+
 Calling up the Help menu, I tried to verify what it means, but there are no new items.
 But it seems.... Information can not be found.
 What's going on?
 
 7 ... the story of the Seven Star Heroes, I recently heard the story.
-Calling up the Help menu, i verify if there are no new items.
+
 
 "A Hero may have been defeated in some wave somewhere"
 "However, these brave heroes participated in other waves, but just in case... I will look into other countries and seek information"(Queen)
-7 ... the story of the Seven Star Heroes, i recently heard the story.
+
 The Queen gave instructions to a messenger soldier to gather information.
 The opening of the case was here ......