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- **Технический писатель:**
- To be, or not to be: that is the question:
- Whether 'tis nobler in the mind to suffer
- The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune,
- Or to take arms against a sea of troubles,
- And by opposing end them? To die: to sleep;
- No more; and by a sleep to say we end
- The heart-ache and the thousand natural shocks
- That flesh is heir to, 'tis a consummation
- Devoutly to be wish'd. To die, to sleep;
- **Научный редактор:**
- Лексика слишком сложная. Замени слова на более понятные.
- **Технический писатель:**
- To be, or not to be: that is the question:
- To virtually be in pain,
- In all the bad stuff of terrible doom,
- Or to fight against troubles,
- And, by contrary, stop them? To die: to sleep;
- No more; and by a sleep, by the way, we stop
- The heartache and all the other bad stuff too,
- Which usually happens if you are made out of meat. To die
- Would be great. To die, to sleep;
- **Научный редактор:**
- Упрости порядок слов. Хватит писать в столбик!
- **Технический писатель:**
- To be, or not to be: that is the question.
- Is it better to be in pain and all the bad stuff of terrible doom, or to fight against troubles and stop them?
- It might be better to die and with the help of dying actually stop all the bad stuff. Yes, it would be great to die!
- **Научный редактор:**
- Подсократи, чтобы только по существу было. Сложносочиненные предложения исключи.
- **Технический писатель:**
- To be or not? Is it better to be in pain or to fight? It is clearly better to stop all this by dying.
- **Научный редактор:**
- Приведи в соответствие со стандартом.
- **Технический писатель:**
- Chapter IXX: General Troubleshooting
- Q: To be or not?
- A: If you have to choose between being in pain and fighting, you are recommended to die.
- **Научный редактор:**
- В альтернативах непонятны исходы.
- **Технический писатель:**
- Chapter IXX: General Troubleshooting
- Q: To be or not?
- A: If you have to choose between being in pain and fighting, you are recommended to die.
- In case you either don't feel like dying or didn't manage to die, please contact local technical support.
- **Научный редактор:**
- Хорошо!
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