PR Inferior Knight 1.5

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Parents have a responsibility as well, sending their kid out to the world while they're still green…
Parents have a responsibility as well, sending their kid out into the world while they’re still green...

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all of that is naturally capable by ordinary 16 year olds…
all of that is naturally something ordinary 16 year olds are capable of…

After I contemplated about what I should do in my own way…
After I contemplated what I should do in my own way...

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I drew a conclusion.
I came to a conclusion.