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  1. 3/10
  2.  
  3. 1. Rephrase, remove all caps (go all lowercase, or regular capitals):
  4. HEART BEAT TALENTS WAS BORN TO ANSWER THE NEED OF THE OLD, NEW AND
  5. UPCOMING TALENTS OF THE LGBTI ELECTRONIC MUSIC SCENE.
  6. WE ARE EXPERIENCED PROFESSIONALS, UNIQUELY POSITIONED TO UNDERSTAND AND DELIVER RESULTS FOR OUR ARTISTS.
  7.  
  8. 2. MISSION NOT MISION
  9.  
  10. OUR MISSION: SUPPORTED IN AN EXTENSIVE NETWORK OF CONTACTS FROM ALL OVER
  11. THE WORLD, OUR ***MISION*** IS TO PROMOTE THE PERSONAL AND PROFESIONAL
  12. DEVELOPMENT OF OUR ARTISTS.
  13. OUR VISION: WE'RE AIMING TO BE THE #1 LGBTI ARTIST MANAGMENT AGENCY
  14. IN THE WORLD, REPRESENTING TOP DJS, PRODUCERS, AND TALENT IN THE LGBTI ELECTRONIC
  15. MUSIC SCENE.
  16.  
  17.  
  18. 5/10
  19.  
  20. SOCIAL COMMUNICATOR WITH SPECIALIZATION IN MARKETING AND PUBLIC
  21. RELATIONS WITH MORE THAN 4 YEARS OF EXPERIENCE IN COMMUNICATIVE
  22. AND DIGITAL STRATEGIES, WORKING FOR THE BIGGEST BRANDS IN
  23. LATINOAMERICA SUCH AS COCA COLA, P&G, CLARO, ABSOLUT****,**** AMONG OTHERS
  24.  
  25. INTERNATIONAL PRODUCER AND PROMOTER OF THE BIGGEST LGBTI
  26. ELECTRONIC MUSIC FESTIVAL IN COLOMBIA.
  27.  
  28. INTERNATIONAL TOUR MANAGER OF GRINDR ON TOUR.****
  29.  
  30. 6/10
  31.  
  32. WHY *** JOIN *** HEART BEAT TALENTS
  33.  
  34.  
  35. 7/10
  36.  
  37. 1. Consider talking directly to your audience instead of ARTISTS (Talk to YOU).
  38. for example:
  39. WE HAVE A DECADE LONG EXPERIENCE IN THE INDUSTRY. THIS HELPS US GUARANTEE
  40. YOUR PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT AS AN ARTIST. **
  41.  
  42. IF YOU DO THAT YOU HAVE TO DO THAT EVERYWHERE....
  43.  
  44. 2: otherwise, edits:
  45.  
  46. ** WE BUILT A NETWORK OF PROMOTERS, CLUBS, BRANDS AND
  47. ENTREPRENEURS FROM ALL OVER THE WORLD THAT SUPPORT OUR AGENCY. **
  48.  
  49. WE HAVE A DECADE LONG EXPERIENCE IN THE INDUSTRY. THIS HELPS US GUARANTEE
  50. THE PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT OF OUR ARTISTS. **
  51.  
  52. WE OFFER PROFESSIONAL AND INTEGRAL SUPPORT PROVIDING
  53. ALL THE TOOLS NEEDED TO ACHIEVE THE PERSONAL AND PROFESSIONAL
  54. OBJECTIVES THAT YOU, AS AN ARTIST, ARE LOOKING FOR.
  55. WE CELEBRATE OUR ARTISTS' GROWTH, AND CONSTANTLY LOOK FOR WAYS TO MAKE YOU BIGGER, AND BETTER.
  56.  
  57. WE HELP WITH THE PROCESS OF CONTACTING, **ADVISING**,
  58. COUNSELING AND BOOKING OF SHOWS **AROUND** THE WORLD, GUARANTEEING
  59. THE INCREASE OF THE EARNINGS AND FEES OF OUR ARTISTS.
  60.  
  61.  
  62. 9/10
  63.  
  64. 1. WHAT DOES "COMMERCIAL AND PROMOTION RIGHTS" MEAN? DO YOU TAKE THOSE? ARE THEY EXCLUSIVE? WORLDWIDE?
  65.  
  66. COMMERCIAL AND PROMOTION RIGHTS.
  67. INCREASE ON THE ARTIST FEES AND EARNINGS.
  68. SUPPORT IN THE PROCESS OF PROMOTION, CONTACT, BOOKING,
  69. CONTRACTS AND APPROPRIATE NEGOTIATIONS OF AGREEMENTS.
  70. HELP WITH GETTING VISIBILITY OF THE ARTIST, THEIR MUSIC AND ORIGINAL PRODUCTIONS AND
  71. WORLD EXPOSURE POTENTIAL.
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