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Status: Rejected            Type: Candy                Designation: Private

Appearance: a nanoplastic tub of novelty candy
Dropped:    A nanoplastic tub of novelty candy is here, drawing attention to
itself.
Examined:   This nanoplastic tub has been decorated with many flashing LED
lights and tacky decals, all offering an aura of immature carnality. Various
suggestive phrases and drawings are visible on all sides of the container, and a
small internal device plays a riff of funky electronic music on repeat whenever
the lid is opened. Within the container, a plethora of colorful gummy candies
fill the tub almost to the brim. With an unfortunate level of detail, each gummy
has been shaped to resemble the member of one of the various phallus-bearing
races of the Starmourn Sector. The inside of the container has an almost
sickeningly sweet smell, adding yet another layer to the sensory overload
present within this treat.
Eat_first:    As you open the tub of candy, electronic funk music plays from the
container and the LDs flash wildly. You pop gummy after gummy into your mouth.
The gummies are sweet and taste vaguely of various fruits.
Eat_third:    $+(caster$) opens the lid of a nanoplastic tub, and a tacky
electrical funk music begins to play. From within, $(caster$) pulls out gummy
after unfortunately-shaped gummy, and soon all the gummies have been consumed.
Smell:        The inside of the nanoplastic tub smells sickeningly sweet.
Taste:        Pulling a single gummy from the nanoplastic tub, you taste an
overwhelming sweetness and a vague hint of fruit.
Comments:
2019/07/15 21:15:21 > Approvers: Your design has been rejected. Reason: "fill"
should be "fills" to agree with singular "plethora" in line four of the
examined. In the eat_first, "LDs" should be "LEDs".
2019/07/15 21:15:57 > Flipilaria: That's the part of what I wrote that you
objected to?
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