Dialogue: 0,0:02:53.56,0:02:56.57,Insert1,,0000,0000,0000,,Go! Go! Robo-Sohara.
			Something after this line and the next line is missing, or a timing error
Dialogue: 0,0:11:44.83,0:11:47.01,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Tomo-chan, what about your advice on the dream?
			swap the "your" and "the" around?
Dialogue: 0,0:12:22.94,0:12:27.16,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Those two always look seem to be having fun together.
			look?
Dialogue: 0,0:12:35.84,0:12:40.23,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,There was a rumour that a girl with wings has appeared at school.
			has -> had?
Dialogue: 0,0:13:23.34,0:13:31.08,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,That night, it was reported on TV that they've discovered a mysterious panty meteor shower.
			they've -> they'd
Dialogue: 0,0:14:55.62,0:15:02.23,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I wonder if I can also have fun if I had club activities like those...
			Not sure if she was refering to the group or their activity. My mind when and auto'd "them" instead of "those"
Dialogue: 0,0:21:42.19,0:21:47.15,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,What do monkeys that don't even know how to control fire know about culture?
			What do monkeys, that don't even know how to control fire, know about culture?
Dialogue: 0,0:24:42.78,0:24:47.88,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I will show you the live music life!
			I will show you the life of live music!
Dialogue: 0,0:25:51.45,0:25:55.74,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,You plebeians should behave yourselves just as plebeians should.
			I'd move the "just" after the "should"
Dialogue: 0,0:29:21.73,0:29:27.62,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He's a close upperclassman to Sakurai-kun, so he must be an amazing person.
			"a close upperclassman" /derp "He's an upperclassman/senpai/senior close to Sakurai-kun, so he must be an amazing person."
Dialogue: 0,0:30:02.23,0:30:03.94,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I want to show my gratitude.
			wanted?
Dialogue: 0,0:30:09.91,0:30:14.29,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Shouldn't I be the one saying thanking him?
			no saying.
Dialogue: 0,0:31:29.68,0:31:34.08,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,If you're looking for Mikako, she should have arrived already but has to prepare the events.

Dialogue: 0,0:37:20.59,0:37:24.94,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I thought that if I buried myself in the ground, I can get vitamins just like vegetables do!
			vitamins -> nutrition
Dialogue: 0,0:38:42.49,0:38:45.44,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I want to give it to Sakurai-kun to taste...
			it -> some, also to then to again... sounds a bit weird.
Dialogue: 0,0:42:15.19,0:42:18.84,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I'm also always looking at you guys.
			looking at -> watching
Dialogue: 0,0:42:56.56,0:43:00.49,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I didn't matter it was all just a fleeting dream.
			"It didn't matter if it was just a fleeting dream."
Dialogue: 0,0:43:08.80,0:43:11.72,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Maybe if I'm just a little braver...
Dialogue: 0,0:43:12.45,0:43:16.65,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,...I can be closer to the person I like.
			"Maybe if I was just a little braver... ... I could be closer to the person I like."
Dialogue: 0,0:45:54.51,0:45:58.56,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Damn it, what do they think other people's houses are?

Dialogue: 0,0:46:48.16,0:46:54.50,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It's the heart and spirit that want to discover the new world.
			want -> wants
Dialogue: 0,0:53:59.84,0:54:01.46,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I's a really weird club no matter how you look at it.
			It's
Dialogue: 0,0:54:38.95,0:54:44.41,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It's as if I can even forget all the sad things when I look at the scenery here.
			Scenery "from" here.
Dialogue: 0,0:58:54.59,0:58:58.68,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I feel a little empty when the city is changing.
			is -> starts?
Dialogue: 0,1:03:15.66,1:03:19.36,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Didn't you give them to me during the cooking lesson once?
			them -> some "Didn't you give some to me once during a cooking class?" ┐(￣ー￣)┌
Dialogue: 0,1:06:02.02,1:06:07.32,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I saw someone who looked exactly like her in a capsule in the Synapse.
			drop the "the"
Dialogue: 0,1:19:53.58,1:19:56.09,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,She's merely someone who threw away the pride of being from the Synapse,
			drop the "the"
Dialogue: 0,1:20:01.26,1:20:06.11,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,That's why I've given her the reality she should never have wished for.
			swap around the "never have" i think. Or ignore.
Dialogue: 0,1:23:08.34,1:23:10.36,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I'll try hacking it to stop its movements.
			"it" or "her"?
Dialogue: 0,1:24:54.93,1:25:02.43,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Zeta became an Angeloid of her own will in order to meet Sakurai Tomoki.
			"of" -> "on"
Dialogue: 0,1:25:54.75,1:25:59.75,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,No, Alpha! You'll be killed if you mess with dimensional collapses !
			space before the ! mark.... wow.
Dialogue: 0,1:26:00.54,1:26:04.09,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,We have both been given powers we never asked for,
			"We both have" ┐(￣ー￣)┌
Dialogue: 0,1:26:25.94,1:26:30.03,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I won't let you...be alone.
			... <space> be alone.
Dialogue: 0,1:28:22.34,1:28:25.36,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,We're running out of time—I can't stop it anymore!
			no space before and after the - ?