"Town Dialog" section:

#259: Should add a possessive apostrophe to "Returners" (i.e. "the Returners' hideout")

#2415:  I still think you should add a ellipsis to the beginning of Page 2, as the end of Page 1 ends with one and the second page continues the same statement.  Entries #54 and $8B in the "Small Captions" handle the ellipsis transitions in the same way in your v1.1 patch.

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"Small Captions" section:

#07: Add some kind of punctuation to "Revived", perhaps an exclamation point?  Almost every other simple notification in this section of the script has some kind of punctuation at its end (e.g. #25, 32, etc.)

#0F: Same goes for "Cyclone attack"
#4A: Same goes for "Erebus changes into Hidon"
#65: Same goes for "Vast energy focused"
#76: Same goes for "Remove "Reflect""

#85: Add an ellipsis to the beginning of Page 3, as Page 2 ends with one.  That way it keeps consistency with #8B, which is a rather similar string.

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"Big Captions" section:

#51: Perhaps capitalize "what's with this vibration?!"

#69: Capitalize "O" in "o wild one".  It's the only example of "O" used in this manner that you missed.

#120, #122, and #123:  Perhaps capitalize "Great" in "great Ultros" and "great Relm", as they're using those phrases as titles?