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  2. SHORT_DESC: resplendent white enamelled plate armour
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  4. LONG_DESC: Shining brightly, (added comma) a suit of white enameled (one L) plate armour has been left here.
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  6. EXT_DESC: Interlocking plates of white enameled (one L, unless that's an America-specific thing) steel have been combined to create a suit of armour which blends functionality and elegance in a piece of blacksmithing artwork. (I really like that sentence!) An expert hand has shaped the steel plates to deflect blows from sword and fist alike. Light chainmail provides added protection against any weapons that slip through the gaps without burdening the wearer and restricting their movement. Thick leather straps, dyed a deep crimson, buckle the component plate pieces securely to the wearer. Engravings in gold, (added comma) detailing various tenets of the Holy Church of Achaea (maybe a comma here, not really sure) have been intricately worked onto the smaller plates. A magnificent dragon, wings outstretched and head thrown back in an everlasting roar (I took out this comma) has been emblazoned upon the breastplate. The deep red of its scales contrasts sharply against the pure white background, (added comma, but I don't think it's strictly
  7. necessary) while gold highlights lend it an eerily life-like (hyphenated) quality. A great helm completes the suit with a thick plume of red feathers extending from the top. (Added "with" because the <here's a
  8. thing comma more description of it> style was being used a lot)
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