Adventurer license chapter 15.1

[2]
"What'll I do if it breaks!!?"
"What will I do if it breaks!!?"

[4]
"we lived on in this place together snuggly."
"We live together peacefully in this place."

"Oh- You're already done eating?"
"Oh- have you already finished eating?"

[5]
"Sun's in charge of cooking today, you know?"
"Sun is in charge of cooking today, you know?"

[7]
"As I explained, I'm leaving this village the day after tomorrow."
"As I have explained, I'm leaving this village the day after tomorrow."

"had monsters manifesting which never existed before."
"Have monsters manifesting that did not exist before." ( I am assuming that these monsters are real and not the stuff of legend. Thus since they are still exist, I changed it to “ have". If not, please correct back.)

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"If that's what'll happen, I'm just gonna stay here."
"If that is what’s going to happen, I'm just gonna stay here."