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  1. Teenagers should be allowed to play ''dangerous'' sports, for many reasons. Which will be reviewed in this article. Every parent knows that it is apart of growing up and learning for their kids. and its also known to make them stronger adults in the future. This will continue to be a widely asked question for parents and schools, but in the mind of every parent will always be the best thing for their children. Although, sometimes closetting them for their safety, can be the most damaging thing you can do. Not only will teenagers participating in sports grow their social life, but it will also toughen them up for adulthood.
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  3. Sports is also just a great way for kids to widen their friendgroups, and simply feel more at ease when talking to other people. Seventy percent of teens say that anxiety is a "major problem" in their day to day life, and makes it a lot harder to make friends. Sharing the same interests is an easy conversation starter, and a gateway to a friendship.
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  5. Adulthood is hard in itself, and living closetted by your parents just makes it a lot more difficult. Teenagers don't grow up properly without a little pain and fear in their lives. It's good for teenagers and children to grow up with some kind of understanding of what is considered dangerous, or safe.
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  7. Doing challenging things is beneficial to teens' growing bodies, but in excess, it can be detrimental. challenging activities are good for the body; as, with purely light activities, one's muscles can't strengthen.
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  9. Within all of the information gathered, I have come to an analysis conclusion. Children and teenagers should be allowed to play "Dangerous Sports" because of the simple life skill of social queues, and exercise; children need to get their energy out somehow. If this controversal debate continues to be argued over, sometime or later this might become a real change in the world. Public schools will allow kids to play Kickball, Dodgeball, or any other dangerous sport.
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  15. I changed a lot of grammar mistakes within this essay, simple punctuation edits; I also had the chance to re-word a lot of statements in a more third person view, and just generally easier to read. I have also edited my conclusion paragraph a bit, I noticed a lot of change within my essay's narrator voice, and by simply including more detail to a sentence can go a long way.
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