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  1. Translation by /u/ scanlations and Shapes (afterword, SFX)
  2. Proofread by Shapes and 8055
  3.  
  4. Notation:
  5. > - Speech
  6. # - Comment
  7. * - SFX
  8.  
  9.  
  10.  
  11.  
  12. Ai Love Okachi
  13. # probably obvious, wordplay for Ai(kawa) loves Okachi
  14.  
  15. p3
  16. # SFX for heavy rain
  17.  
  18. >It's...started to rain.
  19.  
  20. >What should I do?
  21. >I didn't bring an umbrella with me.
  22.  
  23. >Aikawa?
  24.  
  25. p4
  26. >What's up? Heading home already?
  27. >Yeah, the committee meeting ended early. I forgot my umbrella, though.
  28.  
  29. >H-Hey, Aikawa, do you mind if I come over to your place to do some homework?
  30.  
  31. >Yeah, sure!
  32. >Let's do it together <3
  33.  
  34. >Alright, let's go to your house together, shall we?
  35.  
  36. p5
  37. >I'm home~
  38. >Pardon the intrusion.
  39.  
  40. #SFX for dead-silence
  41.  
  42. >Oh right. Nobody's here until the evening today.
  43. >!
  44.  
  45. >...
  46. >Looks like we got wet after all. # no uncertainty intended
  47. >Hang on, I'll fetch us some towels.
  48.  
  49. >?!
  50.  
  51. p6
  52.  
  53. >Mm
  54. >Mmm
  55.  
  56. >Ah<3
  57.  
  58. >Mm<3
  59.  
  60. >Should we take a bath?
  61. >Hah # Text outside of bubble
  62. >Hah # Text outside of bubble
  63. >We'll both catch colds if we stay like this.
  64.  
  65. p7
  66. >No matter how many times I see 'em, your boobs are amazing, Aikawa. I'm so jealous.
  67. >Th-They're not that great.
  68. >They're heavy, they hurt my shoulders, and I can't wear that many cute clothes...
  69. # More literal: They're heavy, my shoulders get stiff, and I can't find many cute clothes (to wear)
  70. # really really literal: are not many cute clothes
  71. # imho, the original translation is fine
  72.  
  73. >So, I wouldn't say bigger is better.
  74. # Alternative: So, big isn't always good.
  75. >Ahaha, I guess you've got your own problems.
  76. # Alternative: Ahaha, I see, they bring a lot of troubles, too.
  77. # She isn't directly referring to Aikawa here, but as Aikawa's breasts are the implicit context, the original translation is fine too.
  78.  
  79.  
  80. p8
  81. # SFX for water-spraying
  82.  
  83. >Mm
  84. >Mmm<3
  85.  
  86. >Aikawa
  87. >I want to make you feel really good.
  88.  
  89. >Ah<3
  90. >Ahn<3
  91.  
  92. p9
  93. >Haaaaaahn<3
  94.  
  95. >Ah
  96.  
  97. >Ah<3
  98.  
  99. >Ah<3
  100. >Ah<3
  101.  
  102. p10
  103. >Aaahn<3
  104. >Aaah<3
  105.  
  106. >Hah
  107. # SFX for creamy(?) Onomatopoeia needed
  108. >Hah
  109.  
  110. >O-Oh man, I-I came...
  111. >Did it feel good?
  112.  
  113. >Y-Yeah, it felt way better than when I do it by myself...
  114. # Entering water splash SFX
  115. >But it's kinda embarrassing.
  116.  
  117. >How's the temperature? It's not too hot, is it?
  118. >It's just right.
  119.  
  120. p11
  121. >Mm
  122. >Mmm
  123.  
  124. >Hah # Text outside of bubble
  125. >Hah # Text outside of bubble
  126.  
  127. >Hah~ # Text outside of bubble
  128.  
  129. >Should we get out soon?
  130. >Yeah...
  131.  
  132. p12
  133. # SFX for wind blowing
  134. >I wonder if they'll get dry, this way?
  135. # If they get in the wind this way, they should dry, don't you think?
  136.  
  137. >Until they get dry, do you want to wear my clothes?
  138.  
  139. >No need...
  140. >Eh?
  141.  
  142. >!?
  143.  
  144. *whump # falling/landing SFX, pomf
  145.  
  146. p13
  147. >O-Okachi...?
  148.  
  149. # SFX for Gently (falling), lowering
  150.  
  151. p14
  152.  
  153. *snap # SFX for arms locking in?
  154. >Mm
  155.  
  156. *lick
  157. >Ah<3
  158. >Ah<3
  159. >Ng<3
  160.  
  161. >She's wet...
  162.  
  163. p15
  164. # grab SFX
  165.  
  166. >O-Okachi...
  167. >This position is embarrassing...
  168.  
  169. >Aikawa's flavor that only I know of...
  170. # less literal: Aikawa's secret/special taste that only I know...
  171.  
  172. >Nm
  173. >Aikawa's delicious.
  174.  
  175. >Ah<3
  176. >Mmph Mmph # as in: inhale/sniff
  177. >Aaaahn<3
  178.  
  179. p16
  180. >Okachi, it's not fair if only you do it...
  181. >I want to make you feel good too
  182. >Eh!?
  183.  
  184. *kiss<3 # May substitute chu<3 here
  185. *kiss<3 # May substitute chu<3 here
  186. >Mm
  187. >Mmm
  188.  
  189. >Ah<3
  190.  
  191. >Hah<3
  192. >Mhah
  193.  
  194. >Oh man...
  195. >Hah # Text outside of bubble
  196. >Hah # Text outside of bubble
  197. >This feels super good...
  198.  
  199. >Ah<3
  200. >Mm Mm
  201. >Aah<3
  202.  
  203. p17
  204. *fondle
  205. >Amazing... She's getting really wet...
  206. >Hah
  207. >Hah
  208.  
  209. >Okachi's...
  210. >Ah<3
  211. >looks really pretty...
  212.  
  213. >Delicious...
  214.  
  215. >Aikawa...
  216. >I...I wanna lick yours too...
  217.  
  218. >Alright, let's both lick each other.
  219.  
  220. p18
  221. >A...Alright then, I'll go on top.
  222. >Sure...
  223.  
  224. >Ah<3
  225.  
  226. >Hah
  227. >Ng
  228.  
  229. >Aikawa... I want to cum together with you
  230. >Yeah... Let's cum together
  231.  
  232. p19
  233. >Ah<3
  234. >Ah<3
  235. >Ahn
  236. >Mmaah<3
  237.  
  238. >Nng<3
  239. >Ah
  240. >So good<3
  241.  
  242. p20
  243. >Aikawa
  244. >Ah, I'm cumming
  245.  
  246. >Okachi
  247.  
  248. >Mmm<3
  249. >Mm<3
  250. >Mmmmmmmmmmm<3
  251.  
  252. p21
  253. >Hah #Text outside of bubble
  254. >Hah #Text outside of bubble
  255. >Hah #Text outside of bubble
  256.  
  257. >Aikawa...
  258. >I love you
  259. >I love you too...
  260. >Nn<3
  261.  
  262. >Doesn't look like they're dry yet.
  263. >I can't exactly leave you naked, though...
  264. >I know!!
  265.  
  266. p22
  267. >Aikawa...this is embarrassing
  268. >It's all frilly... # Text outside of bubble
  269. >So cute!!
  270.  
  271. >Y-You think so?
  272. >Yeah! It's really cute! You should wear stuff like this more often!
  273.  
  274. >These kinds of clothes don't suit me so I don't really have any.
  275. # Better, I think: I always thought these kinds of clothes wouldn't suit me, so I really don't have any.
  276. >In that case, we should go shopping together, I'll pick something for you <3
  277. >S-Sure.
  278.  
  279. p23
  280. >Ah, it's gotten this late already.
  281.  
  282. >Looks like it's stopped raining.
  283.  
  284. >Your uniform's still a little damp, isn't it?
  285. >Hm, I'll just stick it in the wash when I get home.
  286.  
  287. p24
  288. >Aikawa.
  289.  
  290. >?
  291.  
  292. >I love you.
  293. >Yeah...
  294.  
  295. >See you tomorrow <3
  296.  
  297. p25
  298. Afterword
  299.  
  300. You have my deepest thanks for purchasing this book.
  301. From the content perspective, I've drawn it as the successor of “Aikawa, I love you!”, distributed at C88.
  302. I actually planned to make Okachi the main character, but it turned out that rather Aikawa is taking the leading role in the sex scenes (*laugh*).
  303. I wanted Okachi to receive much affection, which is why I created this book in this way.
  304. In the study scenes, Okachi is over-looking the studying of her brother and sister, so the setting I have in my head is that she's smart.
  305. # Alternative: In the study scenes, Okachi is over-looking the studying of her siblings...in the case that the plurality of her younger brother(s)/sister(s) are not known. The anime only references Kei having a younger brother, once, so any other information would be from the manga.
  306.  
  307. The start of this project was still before the poll results came, so I should have had time enough to experiment with some side ideas and drawing names, but I had some troubles in my private life and wasn't able to devote much time to the manuscript, so in the end, once again, I'm near the deadline for the manuscript submittal, writing the afterword right now (I'm 3 hours before the deadline right now).
  308. I drew the pictures for the sex scenes with extra devotion. Speaking for myself, I think they turned out pretty lewd.
  309.  
  310. There are still lots of Yuyushiki material I want to draw/write in my notebook, so I would be happy if you continue to obtain Nekohigetei books in the future.
  311. Letting me read your impressions, usage reports(?) and the like on twitter makes me extremely happy and I think I want to publish more books for Yuyushiki, therefore, certainly, until next time.
  312.  
  313. Nekohigetei
  314.  
  315.  
  316. Ai Love Okachi
  317.  
  318. Publication: Nekohigetei
  319. Publisher: Nekohige
  320. Publishing date: 2015-12-29
  321.  
  322. Contact Information:
  323. #
  324. #
  325.  
  326. Press
  327. Burosu Inc.
  328.  
  329. - Minors under 18 are prohibited from reading or purchasing this work.
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