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"This is a big deal" => "This is incredible!"

"To be able to solve such a mystery with no issues!" => "To be able to solve such a mystery so flawlessly!"

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"This is the site...the study of the victim" => "This is the site...the victim's study."

"It's about time to call in the suspects for verification" => "It's about time to call in the suspects for questioning."

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"That contemptuous attitude is something I don't like!!" => "I hated that contemptuous attitude!"