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  1. [13:15] Fishonomply: Here.
  2. [13:16] #SabreManectric∫: hi
  3. [13:16] #SabreManectric∫: alright let me get this set up
  4. [13:17] #SabreManectric∫: ok so im gonna give you a prompt, you'll have ten minutes to reply as any character with any amount of posts, description what not included
  5. [13:17] #SabreManectric∫: got it?
  6. [13:17] Fishonomply: I already knew, but yes.
  7. [13:17] #SabreManectric∫: ok cool
  8. [13:19] #SabreManectric∫: alright here is the prompt
  9. [13:20] #SabreManectric∫: Your character is faced with an attack by several basic rodent Pokemon (Yungoos, Rattata, whatever you want). How do they handle this attack - what do they do, how do they react?
  10. [13:20] #SabreManectric∫: ((you'll have unti XX:30
  11. [13:22] Fishonomply: An trainer with his first badge, Joe. Confronted with the threat of the multiple Pokémon, he called out Pidgeotto. "Go, Pigeotto!" "Pigeotto!" "Use Wing Attack!"
  12. [13:23] Fishonomply: Pidgeotto gracefully flew up as Joe ran away from a horde of Yungoos. "Hurry, Pidgeotto! They've!- gasp almost caught up to me!"
  13. [13:26] Fishonomply: Soaring down, the Pidgeotto struck multiple foes, but then a Yungoos quickly retaliated by biting onto the right wing of Pidgeotto. Pidgeotto tried to shake Yungoos off, but then being weighted down, he lost flight and hit a tree.
  14. [13:26] Fishonomply: "Come back, Pidgeotto!" A red beam struck the unconscious and heavily injured Pidgeotto as Joe ran more, his lungs burning. "Come on out, Dartrix! Help me!"
  15. [13:27] Fishonomply: Dartrix came out, surprised and starting to run. "Dang it! I said help, not run! PLEASE HELP!"
  16. [13:30] Fishonomply: Dartrix then used Razor Leaf, fazing multiple Yungoos and causing the horde to crash into one another. He was almost.. to the Pokémon Center.. his heart beat like it was gone.. and saw the symbol of the Pokeball..
  17. [13:30] Fishonomply: and he rushed in, stopping for the first time since they started chasing him. He was safe.
  18. [13:31] #SabreManectric∫: ((alright that's it))
  19. [13:31] Fishonomply: ((yep. did I do good?))
  20. [13:32] #SabreManectric∫: ok so you definitely attacked the prompt and write descriptively, but i would add more detail and not sort of jump from idea to idea
  21. [13:33] Fishonomply: I can understand that
  22. [13:33] #SabreManectric∫: but it's definitely very engaged writing
  23. [13:34] #SabreManectric∫: do you mind if i rewrite one of your paragraphs?
  24. [13:34] Fishonomply: no
  25. [13:35] Fishonomply: I could have added more detail to the scenery though, but I was rushing myself
  26. [13:35] #SabreManectric∫: don't feel rushed in an actual rp
  27. [13:35] #SabreManectric∫: take your time
  28. [13:35] #SabreManectric∫: alright let me just rewrite one of these
  29. [13:38] #SabreManectric∫: Joe, a trainer who had just recently gotten his first badge, stumbled upon a scary threat: a horde of snarling Yungoos! However, he knew what he could do. "Go Pidgeotto!" he cried, summoning the bird Pokemon. The bird looked back in confidence at Joe.
  30. [13:38] #SabreManectric∫: "Wing Attack, Pidgeotto!"
  31. [13:38] #SabreManectric∫: i didn't change anything about it, just gave some more information
  32. [13:38] Fishonomply: That kind of detail? I can do that.
  33. [13:39] #SabreManectric∫: i believe in you c:
  34. [13:39] #SabreManectric∫: alright you passed the first stage
  35. [13:39] Fishonomply: What's next?
  36. [13:39] #SabreManectric∫: a roleplaying section
  37. [13:40] Fishonomply: alright
  38. [13:40] #SabreManectric∫: so im not sure if you're supposed to use your legend but i would
  39. [13:40] #SabreManectric∫: we can basically go until we've completed a small plot of some sort
  40. [13:41] Fishonomply: I think it might be best to do that
  41. [13:41] #SabreManectric∫: would you like to go first?
  42. [13:41] Fishonomply: Sure.
  43. [13:42] #SabreManectric∫: whenever you're ready
  44. [13:42] Fishonomply: In a wood, where all was shrouded in leafage and whispers came from the trees themselves, lay a stone rock, chiseled to the description of Regirock.
  45. [13:43] Fishonomply: A legend of the forest was made that the statue was Regirock himself, in deep hibernation. Whether it was true or not, nobody wanted to go into the forest of shadows and whispers.
  46. [13:44] #SabreManectric∫: ((also let me know when you're done with your paras))
  47. [13:44] Fishonomply: Until now..?
  48. [13:44] Fishonomply: ((done))
  49. [13:49] #SabreManectric∫: "I can't believe the boss made me go here!" muttered someone as they peeled back the vines leading into the clearing with the strange rock. She tried to remember why exactly the boss had her going into this creepy place.
  50. [13:49] #SabreManectric∫: The trees seemed to whisper things... critical things. She did not like that one bit. Soon, she recalled why the boss made her go here. Something about the reports coming from the forest. Maybe there was something paranormal about it?
  51. [13:49] #SabreManectric∫: She scoffed. The forest was just... creepy. That was all. She emerged from the clearing, light shining on her face. If someone were to look at her, they would know that she was a Lopunny. The Lopunny walked a few steps forward before nudging her feet against a rock.
  52. [13:49] #SabreManectric∫: "Hm?" The Lopunny looked down at the rock, examining it. "Is this the rock?" She tried dusting it off. ((done))
  53. [13:53] Fishonomply: As you dusted the rock off, the worn features became more recognizable. Shaped like Regirock, the details were exact. However, small cracks across the rock of the statue, including a much larger one in the area where his strange hand was, gave off glints of light.
  54. [13:53] Fishonomply: Seeping slowly out of the large crack was a form of liquid mineral, being sky blue in color. At the forest floor, it pooled around the legs of the statue, hardening in the shadow.
  55. [13:55] Fishonomply: The six faded yellow eyes of the statue then slowly moved over to look at Lopunny, until she was precisely in sight.
  56. [13:55] Fishonomply: (Done)
  57. [13:57] Fishonomply: Wait, oop. First, there was a trail of undusted rocks leading to Regirock** (shoulda gone at the start)
  58. [14:00] #SabreManectric∫: As she dusted off the rock, the figure of the rock became more clear. For some reason, it was... familiar? As if this was some sort of famous rock. But it wasn't. It was just some... irrelevant rock in the weird creepy forest.
  59. [14:00] #SabreManectric∫: She felt something touch her foot, and looked down. Some sort of... disgusting, weird blue liquid was pooling around her! "Ack!" she screeched, kicking the strange liquid off and bouncing back. She nearly tripped on one of the stones.
  60. [14:00] #SabreManectric∫: Suddenly, the rock seemed to... look at her? She froze in fear. This place was more than weird! ((done))
  61. [14:02] Fishonomply: The six eyes then slowly moved to the large crack, oozing the sky blue liquid. Then, a single wet tear from the statue's middle eye came, falling into the pool below and sizzling. Suddenly, a chunk of rock fell off the legs, revealing more blue liquid.
  62. [14:03] Fishonomply: A deep voice of a person in pain came from the rock. "H.. elp.. me.. Curse.. Regigigas.."
  63. [14:03] Fishonomply: (done)
  64. [14:08] #SabreManectric∫: Was this rock... alive? It was clearly in pain. Falling apart... bleeding, maybe? Vogue was required to give assistance to anyone that needed it. It was in the contract of an Agent. And what was this about Regigigas? The legendary golem that moved the continents?
  65. [14:08] #SabreManectric∫: She needed more information. She rummaged through her studded purse, pulling out a strong medicine. "Erm... Rock. Do you need medicine of some kind?" she asked, with her voice shaking slightly. She really had no idea what to do in this situation.
  66. [14:09] #SabreManectric∫: ((done))
  67. [14:11] Fishonomply: Regirock slowly moved his unharmed arm, clearly cracked. Grunts of pain came from him as he raised it towards a stone mountain that shadowed the forest. A faint outline of an cave could be seen on the tip of the mountain.
  68. [14:11] Fishonomply: "Cave.. orb.. brown orb.."
  69. [14:12] Fishonomply: "Please.. touch me.. with it.." then said Regirock as his features faded again, accumulating a faint amount of what looked like dust in the matter of seconds.
  70. [14:12] Fishonomply: He did not respond.
  71. [14:12] Fishonomply: (done)
  72. [14:14] #SabreManectric∫: "Um, alright...." She gazed at the mountain on the horizon. Seems whatever strangeness was coming from the forest was this rock? She supposed she must help him. "I'm gonna need the girls for this one...."
  73. [14:14] #SabreManectric∫: ((i think we can stop there))
  74. [14:14] Fishonomply: ((yeah if you want))
  75. [14:14] #SabreManectric∫: i really liked it, i think you passed!
  76. [14:14] Fishonomply: wOOOO
  77. [14:15] Fishonomply: So now I make my document? Can I roleplay as Regirock in the period of a week before I get Regirock completely, or must I wait?
  78. [14:15] #SabreManectric∫: Yep, you can now rp as regirock, but make sure to make a doc
  79. [14:15] Fishonomply: I will!
  80. [14:15] #SabreManectric∫: so you can secure it
  81. [14:15] #SabreManectric∫: alright good luck
  82. [14:16] #SabreManectric∫: also remember to have permissions from the RO's (if the legend has no owner) or legend holders to use them in your backstory
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