7/18-8/18 contest results

Emotion: (/40)
Polish: (/30)
Plot: (/20)
Arousal: (/10)

Conk and Ball Torture- GolfAlphaYankee
Emotion: (30/40)
Polish: (20/30)
Plot: (15/20)
Arousal: (2/10)
Comments: A well-timed payoff contained in only 16 pages!
	Solid buildup to an interesting finish, I was definitely moved!
	The constant long sentences got slightly exhausting to read but was well compensated for by the short overall length.
	The plot is well contained, the pacing of his past and the jump to the climax was slightly jarring otherwise.
	I'm unsure how much of it was supposed to be sexy given the nature of the ending, but it technically does fill into a sexual fetish.
Total: 67/100

Journey to Nut Mountain- Mr_Magnezone
Emotion: (20/40)
Polish: (15/30)
Plot: (14/20)
Arousal: (5/10)
Comments: An engaging, flowing adventure into the unknown that goes off with a bang!
	It didn't build up a lot of emotional impact because of the pacing, but I certainly felt fear and anticipation for the hero!
	Very well balanced! The pages flew by and before I knew it I was at the end! However there were some extraneous details written in that didn't seem to have a purpose.
	Simple and easy to grasp with clear obstructions and twists! The first encounter almost felt out of place, however.
	Everyone can appreciate a good nut, though the mood seemed more confused than pleasurable in the last encounter.
Total: 54/100

Benched Beloveds- zacharychi
Emotion: (32/40)
Polish: (18/30)
Plot: (19/20)
Arousal: (9/10)
Comments: What erotic skill woven into these pages! A breathtaking piece of fiction!
	A strong blend of comedy of romance, the transitions were almost seamless between moods.
	Strong vocabulary usage, though sometimes at the expense of disrupting the intended atmosphere.
	A clear start and finish, every moment had a purpose!
	You have a strong control over your words to create a genuinely sexually tense mood!
Total: 78/100

Shellder meets Steelix- RagoxHatena
Emotion: (28/40)
Polish: (20/30)
Plot: (10/20)
Arousal: (4/10)
Comments: A touching story from the eyes of a very special Shellder!
	Extremely cute story, one that makes one feel jealous of the ideal life our heroes live.
	The word choice is very neutral at times, the scene was well described but didn't feel conveyed well to me.
	The story is easy to follow, the points inbetween time skips are well chosen to focus on the theme of the story.
	Though not particularly sexually arousing, there is a romantic theme more prevalent than other entries.
Total: 62/100

Highschool Woes- pigerdiger74
Emotion: (24/40)
Polish: (10/30)
Plot: (12/20)
Arousal: (6/10)
Comments: A comfy, yet titillating day in the life of one very lucky pig!
	I liked the odes to all the regulars on the server, it feels almost nostalgic.
	There were multiple noticable errors and strange cut-offs that significantly hampered the big potential in this story.
	Straight to the point after the introduction, I particularly liked the foreshadowing with our hero.
	Nice and dirty, the unsaid tension of the moment adds greatly to the arousal!
Total: 52/100

5th: pigerdiger74
4th: Mr_Magnezone
3rd: RagoxHatena
2nd: GolfAlphaYankee
1st: zacharychi