Lord Xue Ying

Book 1:
b1 c2: "Not only would this knight stronger than a Star Knight"
be stronger than*

“There’s enemy!”
There's an enemy! / Enemy sighted!*

b1 c3: "The Dong Bo Lie and Mo Yang husband and wife looked at each other with a glimpse of relief.
Needs rechecking, given the next sentence that seems to be the wrong feeling to use.

b1 c4: "It could very well be that when he grew up next time, he would not even be able to recall last night’s incident."
got up* (or woke up) - maybe or maybe not, suggest translation checking.

b1 c6: "Xue Ying was soaked with his own
sweat. He had lost the feeling in his right arm and it was even too numb to move."
Formatting needs fixing a little / line break removing.

b1 c7: "muchfaster than a regular meteor knight"
much faster*

b1 c10: "As for lifting more a magic beast weighing more than 5,000 kilograms, that was nothing."
-minus the first 'more'.

b1 c11: “So fast! Xue Ying, your spear technique is so fast now even I block it.”
I cannot block it*

b1 c12: "They would kill gigantic dragons and drank its blood and eat its meat."
drink*

"In front of them the dragon was really weak."
dragons were* - there's more than one, the other lines makes this clear.

"so I’m afraid that any person’s lineage can be traced back thousands of years to the same bloodlines."
?? 'I'm afraid that' would typically be used only with bad news, sounds strange here.

b1 c13: "It, it was rare for him to go even once a year."
It was rare*

"Since a he was an expert who had is almost reached the ‘spear master’ realm, even though his strength had risen drastically, but after adapting it for two days, Dong Bo Xue Ying had already grown accustomed to become familiar with it."
Uhhh, a few things and should probably be retranslated properly.
Since he was*
who had almost*
even though his strength had risen drastically, but after adapting it for two days - (What? That line seems like a bit of a non sequitur.)
grown accustomed to it.* / grown to become familiar with it.*  - (Pick one, not both.)

"It’ has been a while"
Remove the '

b1 c19: "It kept changed it’s directions"
It kept changing directions*

b1 c21: "The Shadow Leopard’s body was worth more than 100 thousand gold coins."
The previous chapter said 10,000 gold coins, so one of the two is wrong. If it's the other one, then "a hundred thousand" flows far better than "100 thousand".

“The fur weighs more than 1000 kg,” said Zong Ling with a hint of surprise.
“Let me carry it.” Dong Bo Xue Ying was strong to the point that even 100 kg would mean nothing to him
1000 or 100, pick one. (I'm guessing 1000 is correct.)

b1 c24: "“So many gold notes.” Xue Ying could sense everything inside the magical storage ring.
Gold notes were worth 85,000 gold coins! And some small items, which were worth up to 90,000 gold coins!
The rest of the bandits’ belongings were worth another 20,000 gold coins."
Something is wrong here, the previous chapter stated the warrant he had to pay off was only 20,000 gold and that it would take him years to pay off, yet he was carrying around a lot more than that?

“My Lord, we will soon  reach our destination.”
Double space in the middle needs fixing.

b1 c25: "another person appeared at the castle’s entrance,the mighty and robust lion man Tong San."
entrance, the*

b1 c26: " Yesterday’s matter was already completely known by Lord Si An in less than a  day!"
Another double space to fix at the end.

Book 2:
b2 c3: “And then your father and master got together.”
father and mother*

b2 c4: "Looking beyond the walls of the castle, approximately a mountain a few miles away"
approximately a mountain??

"Zong Ling was weary."
wary*

"and then perfect them.Such an incomparably powerful foundation"
them. Such*

"stood there watching  Xue Ying before sighing deeply."
Yet another double space between watching and Xue.

b2 c5: “Only ten or fewer  soldiers can pass and go up the hill.”
Double space between fewer and soldiers. (Additional note: It says 'ten' may pass and then they act like the limit is 5 after that, probably an error but maybe they just decided to have less people than the limit for some reason?)

b2 c7: "a foreman sometimes looked over at  Dong Bo Lie"
Double space, between at and Dong.

b2 c8: "The long spear struck light lightning."
struck like lightning.*

b2 c10: "They were all looks without any substance.!"
Superfluous full stop at the end.

b2 c12: "For example You Yue, byr appearance"
by*

b2 c14: "until it  flew so far high that it vanished into the horizon.
Double space needs fixing.

“Can you now admit that  you’re really not an idiot?”
Another double space.

"Si Liang Hong was definitely among the top five hundred powers listed in the  Dragon Mountain Book."
Another.

b2 c15: "it was precisely the fact that he had  good innate talent"
Another.

"The five experts jumped down simultaneously. With their strength, it was entirely possible to fall 300 meters without being injured."
300 meters seems like a pretty strange thing to be impressed about after jumping 200km off a mountain a few chapters ago. Worth checking the amounts in the raw translation again.

b2 c16: " With power came speed. With speed came power. For example, Xue Ying could easily cover  a distance of a hundred meters in the blink of an eye"
Double space, plus an extra at the start of the sentence.

b2 c17: "Up till now, we’ve checked six of the Great Halls ."
Unneeded space before the full stop.

"Bai Rong ran up to him, carrying  his black-haired guardian in his arms."
More double spaces.

"Clearly,  based on the previous actions"
Another.

b2 c18: "It’s  said that female mages are all extremely intelligent."
Another.

"Initially, it was just going to be a BlackIron level mission for me to accumulate some experience and merit points."
Black Iron*

b2 c19: “Are you a Legend ranker?”Jing Qiu, too, felt the oppressiveness of Xue Ying’s performance.
Space needed before Jing.

"The pair of axes axe could be considered to be one of the most savage weapons."
pair of axes axe? What?

“Scatter.”He changed his mind and gave up on attempting to suppress Xue Ying through his control over the forces of nature.
Space needed before He.

"Most people’s bodies  would require some time to react and acclimatise to the change"
Double space.

b2 c20: "Frequently, mages would try to understand the laws governing the fleshy body and the soul, and some even tried to create a Frankenstein."
Chimera would be far more appropriate than Frankenstein, even if it wasn't for the fact that Frankenstein isn't the name of the monster.

"An example would be Si Clan’s Si Liang Hong who transformed his own fleshy body into a Demonic one, increasing his lifespan tremendously."
Wasn't Liang Hong said to be a woman? I could be wrong on this.

why not use it to reduce some of the opponent’s strength?”
Orphan " at the end, doesn't seem to belong anywhere.

"Now, even he wasn’t relying on his two axes, he could still easily dodge Xue Ying’s attack.Hu."
Not sure where the Hu at the end belongs, or if it needs removing entirely.

“Blood Axe – The Destroyer!” The Demonic Emissary screamed out in anger. The black Qi that was previously surrounding his body went onto the two axes.
Might be worth checking the end of the line, might be missing a few words like "as well".

b2 c23: "he would certainly  feel lovely."
Another.

"Dong Bo Xue Ying, do not worry.  I will take everything regarding Si Bai Rong’s matter to my grave."
Another, this time between sentences.

"This is an insignificant  flesh wound!"
Another.

b2 c24: “Introduce  me to all your frost-related heaven’s grade mage equipment.”
Another.

"Usually, such equipment would rival about 30-40 percent of a Meteor mage’s power, or that the equipment was considered to be of a more extraordinary kind."
I get the feeling that the second half of the sentence didn't mean to say exactly that.

b2 c26: "Qing Shi was  furious"
Another.

b2 c27: "At the very most, these items would allow Qing Shi to triumph over anyone e below the rank of Meteor!"
Random e got left in the sentence, not sure why it's there.

"Investigating the background of a person was  simple stuff, yet Xue Ying generously gave them a thousand gold."
Another.

"Dragon Mountain Manor was  made to create an information web regarding everything under the skies."
Another.

"That was why Xue Ying had become  rich overnight and that he could freely splurge 500,000 gold on things he wanted to buy!"
Another.

b2 c28: "But even still, his spirit was already stronger than before by at least  ten times, possibly even  a hundred times!"
Another, two for the price of one!

"Just as  a person could not become fat from one meal"
Another.

"He had over 100 years of time to search for his own path  to become a Transcendent!"
Another.

b2 c29: "This father of ours  really is too pragmatic"
Another.

"Initially, Xue Ying’s impression of You Yue was of someone who was  lovely and understanding"
Another.

"Indeed, Kong You Yue had several attractive qualities – her was quite pretty as well as loveable! From youth , she was trained to understand the hearts of other people."
she was quite pretty* - Also the space after youth.

"After a short while he saw  Kong You Yue and Kong Hao both carrying a trunk each, hurrying out of the place."
Another.

Book 3:
b3 c1: "thus I’ve come to ,at the very least, train my strength."
to, at*

"Beside the road were  a couple of teenagers"
Double space.

"This couple of teenagers in a relationship were  Qing Shi and Ji Rong."
Another.

"Ji Rong picked down a small yellow flower"
picked up*, I would assume.

"she laughed, smiling beautifully  at Qing Shi"
Another.

b3 c2: "because Xue Ying had actually ordered him keep quiet  about the information regarding the existence of his spell scrolls."
Another.

"Outside the castle, Qing Shi and his entourage  carried with them several of the crimson rider corpses."
Another.

"However, if white-robed young man  originated from a big clan"
Another.

"Xue Ying, since the young-master Qing She killed  is not part of Water Rites Town"
Another.

"Usually, those guards stationed within the various towns of Azure River County  were from the Si Clan."
Another.

b3 c8: "Even if it was a Legend ranker fighting against him, most of them could not even last for more than move!"
more than one move!*

b3 c10: "By then, even if Dong Bo Xue Ying found out her true motives, she could care less r."
she could not care less.*

b3 c14: "In the immemorial era, there giants and beasts among the primordial life forms."
Needs checking, doesn't make sense.

"Xiang Pang Yun from the beginning of the mission!"
What? The sentence is missing something.

b3 c15: "He knew his Black-Moon Centipede could only travel at half-sonic speed and a rank four flying-beast could even surpass his mount."
and even a rank four flying-beast could surpass his mount.*

b3 c16: "Zong Ling and Tong San were anxious as well, though they could not do anything to help out l."
Remove the 1 at the end.

Book 4:
b4 c2: "Suddenly flames burst from his whole body and the sort spears turned into meteors which then pierced through Xiang Pang Yun’s four hooved beast body."
short*

b4 c8: “Is it to say that I cannot defeat these two fellows.”
It is hard to say if I can defeat these two fellows(?)* - could use rechecking, sounds highly awkward.

b4 c10: "BMajorWorld…"
A Major World*

b4 c12: "Half an hour, an hour… that lump of True Dan gradually transform."
transformed.*

b4 c13: "he flying freely around the great hall and even making ‘S’ flight pattern before stopping."
he flew freely around the great hall, even making an 'S' flight pattern before stopping*

b4 c14: "but for items like the body of a dead men or refiner organisms"
man*

b4 c15: "It being too early, city gates had yet to be opened."
With it being too early, the city gates had yet to be opened.*

b4 c16: "Such a monster… for the past thousand years, onl theEternal Wind Knight ‘Chi Qiu Bai’ was comparable!"
only the Eternal*

b4 c18: "Xue Ying was takijng  his mother along by her hand"
taking his mother*

b4 c19: "Dong Bo, I’ve not tell you this."
What?

b4 c21: "Coupled with him condensing the True Life Spirit,we could not kill him."
Spirit, we*

b4 c22: "What I need to say has already said."
already been said.*

b4 c28: "Within the martial field, Xue Ying was training his fist techniques"
Missing a full stop at the end.

Book 5:
b5 c3: "Although one could see the surface of the wall rippling, t was able to easily absorb the impact."
it*

"Those who were lacking in this area… Would become passive in the battle! As for those who were nimble, they could certainly play their enemies onto their palm."
Needs completely rechecking and reworking.

"fluid forceit"
A terrible misspelling of faucet? I'm not sure.

"allow him to greatly increase his agility.To all Transcendents"
agility. To*

"provided him with a huge defensivee boost."
defensive*

(Note: The chapter mentions him trading in a spear, I think from book 4 this was supposed to be a staff. Needs checking.)