Valvrave

KAKUMEIKI VALVRAVE


[Various Official Subs] ([NotHorribleSubs])
*0:32 - REDUNDANCY/SCRIPTWRITING - "has been brought to our attention." - Unnecessary description.
**8:12 - MISSING LINE - ADD "Rest assured,"
*8:46 - LITERAL - "The gaps between fits" --> "The intervals between strokes" -- I see "fit" in the online dictionary, but who talks like that?
*11:38 (multiple) - ERROR - "Force recon" --> "Recon" OR "RIF" OR "Reconnaissance in Force" -- Lazy translation.
**11:52 - NUANCE - "It'd be a shame not to show it off" --> "We'll wear them with pride" -- "Taking good care of the clothes" is definitely not showing off. In fact, it's most likely they'll only be worn for special occasions.
**12:40 - CONTEXT - "Caring for your health is part of my job" --> "It's a key official's duty to maintain good health."
*13:41 - NUANCE - "Do you really want to go like that?" --> "Do you really think you can go in your current condition?" -- Awful.

Had enough of this.


[gg]
**0:55 - ERROR - "We simply intended for it to be a military threat." --> "We simply assumed it was a military threat." --　「脅威」 is to be threatened,　「脅迫」 is to threaten.
*4:10 - LOGIC - "You've got something that lets you cheat!" --> "You've got a nice trick up your sleeves!" OR "You've got some cunning moves!" -- There shouldn't be any rules in these combats. This line is you're moves are like cheats in a videogame.
*11:38 (multiple) - ERROR - "Force recon" --> "Recon" OR "RIF" OR "Reconnaissance in Force" -- Lazy translation.
*12:31 - SCRIPTWRITING - "Simple, the way you like it, right?" --> "Nice and simple, huh?"
**12:44 - LITERAL/CONTEXT - "it will be necessary to hold [...] together" --> "we will need you to take command of" -- 「纏める」 here is pretty much getting all departments to work towards one goal. To manage or take command.
*16:15 - NUANCE - "It's related to you" --> "You're to blame."
**16:37 + 16:39 - REDUNDANCY/DETAIL/EDITING? - "Elementary information particles that are unobservable to humanity. Information's elementary building blocks." --> "Elementary information particles that are still yet to be observed by human technology" -- Part of the line was typed out twice. Also it's stated "not yet", so it could be observed one day. Like theorized to exist but no technology to view it yet.
*17:03 - ERROR - "I attack humans too" --> "The reason I attack human is..."
*20:31 - WTF - "navy" --> "fleet" -- ???