Xgirl_crafterX

 Hello there Xgirl_crafterX, This is your Initiate review….

   I would like to first state that this review does not mean you’re a bad builder or that I am going to hard on you. There are just a few things that could be worked on before you rank up.  Also, do not be scared by how much I write. I would just like to explain to very well so you can rank up the next time you submit.  <3

Structure:
   This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have a structure, but it needs some depth. Depth is the layers within a structure that makes it more realistic. You can add stairs, fences, and slabs to any structure to add some depth. You can also create depth by pushing part of a wall backwards. This creates the illusion of the wall containing depth. Now you can add some detail to your structure. Detail is basically adding trap doors and buttons appropriately. If you need a visual example of depth, feel free to visit /warp depthtutorial. It shows you a great example of depth. Now that you have a basic structure, you can add some additional parts to your house, like a porch, chimney, window planters, a roof, doors, and windows. This will add to the structure and make it more appealing than just walls and a flat roof. You can also get away from flat walls and move more towards curved or rounded walls. It is harder to add depth, but is a good challenge for any builder
Terrain:
   This consists of anything involving the ground, like hills, cliffs, and caves. Your terrain is good enough to rank up to the next level since it is not totally flat. Great job<3
Organics:
   This is anything living, like animals and trees. *** Your goal is to make sure you have no easy, spawned trees mad out of bonemeal. To do this, start out by creating a trunk. You have Custom trees, and they are good enough to rank. So another great job here!!!

Fix the things mentioned above and your good do go!!!!! Good Luck<3
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