bfkul's Novice Review

Hey there! :3

I love the additions you've added to the plot.
I am going to say this though.
It might be an idea to add, like you have the bricks, more little areas like that, but closer together. Clumps of bricks, hay, sugarcane? More little organics, more little details.

Also, your still need to just add a couple more roots around the base of the tree to make it more balanced, and I still think you need to just make your leaves slightly more fluffier! Join the together more, instead of only following the branches. Just make the overall leaf shape rounder.

Good luck!
- Dutty :3