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  1. I don't think I'm going to be prepared for this.
  2.  
  3. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/pJhNq.png[/IMG]
  4.  
  5. H-here I go...
  6.  
  7. Actually I can't even go, because i've been listening to the title music on endless repeat. Seriously, this is like reading ef~ a fairy tale all over again.
  8.  
  9. I also had an epiphany of why I didn't like Kira Kira as much. Wasn't that attached to the characters plus the OST was very forgettable and mediocre. Nothing about it really stood out.
  10.  
  11. It's been literally months and months since I've read any of this.
  12.  
  13. Many months later, after finishing several other VNs in the time, I figured I'll start this up again since it does have some decent ratings.
  14.  
  15. gah, the voice. it's so jarring.
  16.  
  17. [img]http://i.imgur.com/CFbNejw.png[/img]
  18.  
  19. Yes that's right Tomoyo, get back to the kitchen and make me a sandwich
  20.  
  21. I understand this gag. It is making me laugh. The characterization isn't quite there but it's funny nonetheless
  22.  
  23. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/v3EkyN5.png[/IMG]
  24.  
  25. Now it's back. backwards. ? It's a story about something a long time ago.
  26.  
  27. omg helping I'm dying
  28.  
  29. [img]http://i.imgur.com/NFe3SZx.png[/img]
  30.  
  31. Man they don't beat around the bush. Right after the 30 minutes of tomoyo-sexing we jump STRAIGHT into the drama.
  32.  
  33. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/ZOBUPUX.png[/IMG]
  34.  
  35. Tomo. Tomoyo. Tomoya. Well this could not possibly get anymore confusing.
  36.  
  37. Tomo may be abandoned?
  38.  
  39. Jesus calm down Tomoyo you're a mess right now lunatic mess.
  40.  
  41. Yeah okay so my last save file was done in 10/04/12 that was 9 fucking months ago
  42.  
  43. Unbelievable.
  44.  
  45. !! Something just clicked with me. The guy that Tomoya was helping out in Clannad was also named Yoshino, just like the Yoshino from Rewrite
  46.  
  47. KEY has a thing for Yoshinos?
  48.  
  49. well shit tomoyo knows us too well
  50.  
  51. [img]http://i.imgur.com/MrJ6LUi.png[/img]
  52.  
  53. Holy fuck it's like it's 1995 look at the fucking computer
  54.  
  55. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/xqF1UMo.png[/IMG]
  56.  
  57. Is this supposed to be a tearful moment? I mean it was so sudden that it was more disconcerting than anything else. Tomo's mother just kind of up and walks away.
  58.  
  59. hahahhaha
  60.  
  61. >It feels really good, Takafumi so y-waIT A MINUTE WHAT AM I SAYING IN FRONT OF TOMO
  62.  
  63. jesus chris Tomoyo slut-status done
  64.  
  65.  
  66. This girl is p cute
  67.  
  68. nevermind jesus christ annoying as fuck I want to punch her
  69.  
  70. What's the drama between Kanako and Takafumi?
  71.  
  72. Seems like there's drama with Kanako's family too? Christ it really is a classic KEY work, no one has a good family ever.
  73.  
  74. oh god what the hell
  75.  
  76. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/LSAoR4l.png[/IMG]
  77.  
  78. the Japanese just got atrocious. IS this what they think foreigners sound like lol
  79.  
  80. >Pikachu? Are you Pikachu? Pikachu desu ne?
  81.  
  82. sides. can't breath
  83.  
  84. >Who are you?
  85. >Saito
  86.  
  87. wait a fucking minute
  88.  
  89. Kanako is kinda a lot annoying like a lot.
  90.  
  91. Seems like everyone is challenging Tomoyo still
  92.  
  93. Kanako comes up with a plot for a drama. Sounds supiciously like Conan
  94.  
  95. This part is just like the tanka poem that we did in Little Busters
  96.  
  97. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/tKILfmK.png[/IMG]
  98.  
  99. >You might as well choose to enjoy life
  100. >There's nothing that pains me here
  101.  
  102. Kanako sure does 180 changes in attitude fast
  103.  
  104. Takafumi's accident three years ago. Kanako's loss of her father.
  105.  
  106. The break-up three years ago. So Kanako's dad was the coach of the track team.
  107.  
  108. aww fuck, I accidentally fucked up and got a bad end. holy shit how is that possible
  109.  
  110. wait Clannad was difficult as fuck to get through so apparently it continues to be the case when it comes to Tomoyo after. Time to retry.
  111.  
  112. wait kanako is a skilled fighter too what the fuck is wrong with this clannad universe every other girl can kick people's asses.
  113.  
  114. Fighting for Tomoyo. That's something different.
  115.  
  116. Oh so she did aikido and karate.. that explains why Kanako is good at that sort of stuff.
  117.  
  118. Some light tears here. I feel maybe there wasn't enough drama? Or maybe not connected with the characters enough?
  119.  
  120. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/UpB9VX7.jpg[/IMG]
  121.  
  122. Oh.. that typing of the narrative makes sense now, since it's in the same theme as Takafumi and Kanako
  123.  
  124. Tomoyo is no fun allowed girl
  125.  
  126. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/KcEs18U.jpg[/IMG]
  127.  
  128. Illegal garbage dump with piles of trash and junk. Of course.
  129. And they're going to try to bring the kid to this kind of a place?
  130.  
  131. Tomoyo seems against putting Tomo and her mother back together. I wonder is it because of how she is attached to Tomo then?
  132.  
  133. AAhahahahahhaa
  134. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/RyflGHB.png[/IMG]
  135.  
  136. God damn Tomoyo After is one giant lewdfest
  137.  
  138. Tomoyo's definitely not taking the separation/split very well at all...
  139.  
  140. aww fuck watch out guys here comes tomoyo rage
  141.  
  142. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/WS13keB.jpg[/IMG]
  143.  
  144. TOMOYO PICKING UP TIMBER AND MOVING IT AROUND. OP SUPERWOMAN STRENGTH
  145.  
  146. A little tear but nothing really serious.
  147.  
  148. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/7JG8UXe.png[/IMG]
  149.  
  150. >The real story is about to begin
  151.  
  152. Tomoyo After After - Day 1
  153.  
  154. >After After
  155.  
  156. Hey that's bullshit you can't have an after after
  157.  
  158. What is this Amnesia shit?
  159.  
  160. oh god fucking hell I miss sunohara antics
  161.  
  162. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/HShY1n5.jpg[/IMG]
  163.  
  164. Oh... he even forgot his injury too..
  165.  
  166. Ogawa's story sounds like a Nagisa clone
  167.  
  168. >Day 7
  169.  
  170. If it hasn't happened by now, everything is meaningless
  171.  
  172. ???? Is the rumor of what I am about to witness true?
  173.  
  174. what
  175.  
  176. what
  177.  
  178. whathalskjfdasdfasd
  179. f
  180. asdwhat
  181.  
  182. what tis
  183.  
  184. what is this
  185.  
  186. bulls
  187. shit
  188.  
  189. what this
  190.  
  191. this
  192. is
  193. fucking
  194. bullshit
  195.  
  196. l
  197.  
  198. ;______________________________;
  199.  
  200. asdlkfja;sdlfkjasdf;lkajsdf;klajsdf;lksadj
  201.  
  202. a;lsdkjfa;lskdfja;lksf
  203.  
  204. three
  205. three
  206. fucking
  207. years
  208.  
  209. asdlfkja;sdflkjasdlkfjasf;dlkjasd;lkfjasd;lkfjsadlfkjas;dlkfjasdf
  210.  
  211. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
  212.  
  213. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
  214.  
  215. what
  216. what the fuck
  217. wasdflkajsd;fasd
  218. h
  219.  
  220. This is completely
  221. unfair
  222.  
  223. what the fuck
  224. crying from rage and anguish right now
  225. fuck you KEY
  226.  
  227. this is bullshit
  228.  
  229. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/HhbFQSF.png[/IMG]
  230.  
  231. [spoiler=JESUS CHRIST MUSIC BOXES ARE NOT OKAY][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/PTePhqR.png[/IMG][/SPOILER]
  232.  
  233. what the fuck
  234.  
  235. music boxes are completely not fair
  236.  
  237. and this shit is straight
  238. into
  239. the
  240. feelings.
  241.  
  242. wow, the tomoyo after ending with the dad was.. a lot of anti-climatic
  243.  
  244. DEAD
  245.  
  246. CRUSHED
  247.  
  248. I CAN'T DO THIS
  249.  
  250. [SPOILER=;_________;]
  251. >for three years, he has been tidying the house every day
  252. >so that you can come back at any time
  253. [/spoiler]
  254.  
  255. Everything written by Forest Bear
  256.  
  257. that ending
  258. open to interpretation
  259.  
  260. >Everything I am about to tell you
  261. ...
  262.  
  263. [spoiler=]happened a long time ago
  264.  
  265. so is it implied that he died?
  266.  
  267. or what about the rehab?
  268.  
  269. idk
  270.  
  271. fucking ambiguous KEY endings[/spoiler]
  272.  
  273. okay 6/10 for most of the VN, 5/10 because fucking excessive tomoyo-fucking, 8/10 for the ending that hit me like a pile of bricks
  274.  
  275. That leaves us at a ... 7? ish
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