R*Novice Review: DiangelloYT

Novice Review:

Good plot so far, but it needs just a bit of work before it can rank up!

The terrain is decent, but its a bit too linear up above the water. So try and smooth that out or rough it up, your call x3
Also, theres not exactly a smooth transition going from land to sea. I understand that theres normally a drop off, but its typically farther out, so try to make the transition a lil smoother.

The boats are good, but compared to the size of the shark and the rest of the marine life, they need to be much bigger! instead of having 3 small ones, maybe try having one larger one.

If your structure is just an arch, it better be much bigger than that xD
Maybe try to turn it in to the start of a large building or something! It will also need appropriate detailing, and a sense of depth to it. Even if you are going to just stick with the arch. The thick detailing is nice, but its not as fluid as it should be. So take that in to consideration.

Hope this helps, and good luck!