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Pvm_Cody

Plot Review #110

Jul 31st, 2015
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  1. Hello Pzagswag,
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  3. My name is Carca (A.K.A. Pvm_Cody) and I'll be reviewing your plot today!
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  5. We rate plots based on three very important aspects: Terrain, Structures (Buildings), and Organics.
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  7. Below is the review specific to your plot, below your review I've explained what we expect in each of the above three categories, as well as a link to an imgur album of real examples of what we expect.
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  9. Review:
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  11. First, your terrain is still mostly flat and it needs to be more creative. Second, the house and bridge need more detail, depth, and the house needs more block variety and a better choice of blocks. The bridge can be improved with supports. The trees look decent, but the leaves are too large for the tree size. Please read below for more advice and reference photos on what we expect. Thanks.
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  13. The three categories your plot is rated on are as follows:
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  15. Terrain:
  16. Consists of all the landscape in the plot, such as hills, mountains, caves, etc. What we expect in this category is a high level of skill in the art of terraforming. To display this we like to see very little to no flat space, and no empty space. Mixing more than just grass/stone into your landscape will also improve the terrain overall, as well make it with varied levels of height and add features such as caves, rocks, rivers, mountains, cliffs, hills, etc.
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  18. Structure:
  19. The second standard of building is structure, which just means anything man-made such as buildings. Such as homes, windmills, farms, etc. We like to see high quality structures. Such as houses with high depth and detail while using a nice mixture of multiple different blocks, instead of just one kind. To make a nice structure, make sure it's NOT a basic shape such as square or circular. Then add depth so the walls and roofs are not flat and boring. Next, add details such as buttons, trap doors, gardens, windows, window frames, fancy roofs, fancy walls, fences, cobblestone walls, and many other options. Make sure you not only use a large combination of blocks, but also make sure they mix well together and are easy on the eyes.
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  21. Organics:
  22. Our third and final standard is organics, which refers to things like trees, plants, statues, fountains, etc. The main thing we look for in this category is your ability to make non-generic, custom trees. They don't have to be spectacular, but they must be natural looking. Also, other things that fall into this category are hand-built flowers, animals, rocks, water, and anything else that is made by nature. We not only want custom trees, we require them, so make sure you have at least 2, preferably more, nice custom trees.
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  24. Examples of what we expect:
  25. http://imgur.com/a/FDLHZ
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  27. At this time your plot is rejected. Just fix some of the issues and resubmit! Keep up the good work!
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  29. You have 3 hours before you can re-submit your plot, use your time wisely!
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  31. Good luck!
  32. Carca
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