Padippica Comic Script

Requirements: 12-15 pages long.

 

Page 1: First panel (wide rectangle panel?) is a frowning Mr and Mrs Northwest and a smug Pacifica standing in front of Dipper. Pacifica is crossing her arms while Mrs Northwest is carrying a long list.

Mr NW says "You're lucky the Gravity Falls court was lenient enough to sentence you with indentured servitude. Dear, tell the boy what today's duties are."

 

Mrs NW says "[some absurdly long list of chores (mopping, waxing floor, feeding peacocks, vacuuming, retiling the ceiling, changing all the lightbulbs, etc) ] but first, you need to -"

 

second panel is an establishing shot of the manor from above, so you can emphasize/exaggerate the sheer size of the home and the land surrounding it. (large square panel?) "-mow the lawn."

 

3rd panel is Dipper objecting and something like "I can't do all that!" looking all stressy.

4th panel is the Northwests walking away, with Pacifica looking over her shoulder saying "You should have thought of that before your grandpa ran over one of our peacocks (substitute some other crime if you want) and asked the judge for you to take his punishment. Now get working, Menial Labor," before laughing.

"Nice one Pacifica" one of her parents compliments.  

3rd and 4th panel are small and square.

 

Page 2:

First panel is Dipper pushing a shitty cheap push mower across the grass. He's complaining about the summer heat, and you can have him sweating a lot, or have his tongue hanging out, or show the sun shining brightly overhead to show he's hot.

Second panel, Dipper looks around.

3rd panel, Dipper takes off his vest and t-shirt.

4th panel is black save for a binocular shaped hole focusing on Dipper's torso.

5th panel reveals it's Pacifica looking at Dipper though some of those old time-y opera glasses though a window in her room.

6th panel has a "later" textbox and shows an uncharacteristically friendly Pacifica popping up behind dipper with a glass of lemonaide. She tells him that since he's been doing such a good job he can use the pool after he's done with everything. (Feel free to suggest a different place to go to, like somewhere inside the house.)

 

Page 3:

Panel one Dipper relaxing pool. Clothes is shorts, maybe a wet white t-shirt if people prefer that over a bare chest (he's going to get naked in the next page anyways.) Or just the shorts to keep things simple. A word balloon has a tail going off screen it says "Hey Dipper~"

Panel two Dipper looks towards the direction of the voice.

Panel three is long and vertical. It shows off a scantily clad Pacifica heading straight towards the viewer. Feel free to upgrade her bust if needed. Small and perky, fullout titty monster, or somewhere in between? "P-pacfica?!" Dipper stutters from out of panel.  

 

If you decide against the poor, Dipper could be somewhere in the house and Pacifica shows up in sexy lingere instead.

 

Panel 4, Pacifica hops into the pool, next to Dipper, showing that he was at the shallow end. Pacifica explains her parents are going to be at a party all night and she wants Dipper to keep her company.

 

Dipper is unsure of course, but Pacifica is quick pin Dipper to the side of the pool and shove her hand down his shorts and start stoking him off while she looks lips with Dipper. This should probably be a big panel. By the time she pulls her face away from his, it looks like Dipper's already starting to succumb to her.

 

"Change your mind?"

Dipper hesitates, saying something like "What if someone sees us?"

"Good idea, we should go to my bedroom."

Last panel is of Pacifica running off back to the house, pulling Dipper along with her by the wrist.

 

Page 4:

Dipper is pushed onto Pacifica's bed, so his legs are hanging off the side.

Pacifica undresses (maybe only partially, if you want to keep her black tights/leggings) and knells down, hooking her fingers around the elastic of Dipper's shorts and pulling them off/down.

Smiling hungrily, Pacifica gives Dipper's dick a little kiss on the head before she puts it in between her tits and starts giving him a titty fuck for some panels.  

She asks Dipper if he's enjoying himself, and he responds "yes."

Pacifica says "good" and pushes Dipper onto his back, and climbs onto the bed over him.

 

 

Page 5:

Dipper sees Pacifica on all fours over him, her rear in the air above her head.

"Then you can make me feel good too," Pacifica says before pushing her crotch onto Dipper's face.

The rest of the panels can be Dipper eating out, Pacifica's reactions before leaning forward so she can 69 Dipper. Pacifica slurps and sucks on Dipper while massaging his balls with one of her finely manicured hands.

 

Page 6:

Dipper comes in Pacifica's mouth. She closes her eyes and gulps down the sperm loudly and you can see cum leaking out of Pacifica's mouth, maybe have her cheeks puff up a little too. Pacifica lifts her head up, licking off a strand of spunk from her lips before turning to face Dipper. She turns around, looking down on Dipper, gasping for air and his faces covered in her juices. "Come on, sit up," she says.

 

Page 7: Dipper's sitting on the bed, with his legs out in front of him, while Pacifica kneels in front of him. Pacifica has her arms around her head, pulling hugging around him as he sucks on one of Pacifica's tits and she reaches down with a hand to stroke Dipper's dick.  When he's hard again, Pacifica lowers herself onto his dick, taking all of him in one quick downward movement (if you decide to have her keep the tights, you could have her rip them in the crotch/take them off, or if she still has her panties, you could have her move them to the side/take them off).

As she's riding the big Dipper, she hears a ringing/vibrating from her phone on the bed.

She sees it's Mabel and has Dipper answer it. "It's your dorky sister."

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Page 8:

Dipper answers it, saying he's still working at Pacifica's place.

Mabel's text bubbles are from the phone. Mabel wonders why he's talking so weird, Dipper assures her it's nothing. Mabel asks why she can hear Pacifica giggling and grunting.

Dipper stammers and sputters before Mabel breaks the silence by correcting guessing that him and Pacifica are fucking each other.

Dipper tries to deny it, but Pacifica is riding him harder than ever and he can't keep his gasps and moans contained.

"Ha! I knew it Dipper!"

"I can explain!"

"Are you doing her doggie dog style?"

"What?"

The next panel is Mabel in her bed wearing just her socks and panties. She has her hands down her pansu. "Are you making sure to pinch her nipples?" (Off panel, a text bubble reads "Hey dood, are you done with my cell phone yet?" accompanied by knock knock of a door getting knocked on.

"I'm hanging up now."

"No wait! I want to hear---*beep*"

At this point, Pacifica wraps her arms around Dipper and leans forward, pushing him back onto his back. She pants and moans as she bucks against Dipper and kisses him.

The last panel of the page, she suddenly stops and squeezes him tightly while crying out. Maybe include those squiggly lines you see in those Korean toon porn comix that are all the rage these days.  

 

Page 9: A panel with a clear view of Dipper going balls deep into Pacifica, filling her up with cum. Put in an internal view insert panel if you think the readers are into that kind of stuff.

2nd panel is Pacifica lifting her hips up

3rd panel is Pacifica with her hips lifted fulling off Dipper. A strand of semen is connecting Pacifica to Dipper's softening dick. You can see that Pacifica looks very pleased with herself while Dipper looks tired and drained.

 

Page 10:

A blissful Pacifica lays down to the side of Dipper, rolling over to herself, propping her head up with her hand (not sure if I'm expressing it correctly, here is an image if I'm not being clear http://us.123rf.com/400wm/400/400/orangeline/orangeline0805/orangeline080501007/3116535-attractive-blond-woman-in-a-bridesmaid-s-dress-lying-on-a-lush-green-lawn-propping-her-head-up-on-he.jpg). "I'm glad you got stuck working for my family. You know, we buy those peacocks by the dozen. Nobody even noticed until I told mom about it. I just wanted to pick on you a bit."

"Why would you do something like that?"

"I don't know, it's just the way I am. But at least I made it up, you should be grateful." Dipper frowns when he finds out about it, but Pacifica laughs.  

"You got that mad face right now, but I know you're not angry on the inside. Otherwise, you wouldn't be so hard again already," she says, looking down at Dipper's throbbing erection.    

Pacifica lays on her back, gesturing to her body at Dipper invitingly. "Now come on, fuck me already, I know you want to."

Dipper looks unsure at first, but by the next panel, he's on all fours over Pacifica, lining up his p0n0s to her vag00 and ready to bone her again.

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Page 11:  Can be a montage of 3-4 positions of sex (I'm thinking missionary with Pacifica leg-locking Dipper, Pacifica being held up and fucked with her back against the wall, reverse cowgirl position, Dipper fucking from the back while her front is pressed against a window, Dipper groping Pacifica's tits while he fucks her from behind, etc), maybe with a little text boxt in the corner of each panel telling the time to give the reader the idea of them fugging for a long time. If you decide to change a sex act from one of the earlier pages to something different, you can stick the old version here instead if you want. Or you can get rid of it if you want to expand an earlier scene. Last panel could be Pacifica looking at the clock and saying something like "Oh crap, my parents are going to get here soon, I got to get you out of here quick."

 

Page 12:  

Wrap up page.

First panel, a limo is in front of the mystery shack, and disheveled Pacifica is saying goodbye to similarly disheveled Dipper so you know he's dismounting the vehicle if it's drawn at an angle where you can't really see him.

Second panel: Dipper is in the living room, just walked past the front door. Mabel is closing it and has a big grin. Maybe it's a lewd grin or just your typical sweet Mabel grin. "Jeeze bro, you're home awful late. Did you spend the whole night just pounding Pacifica?" Dipper has an embarrassed expression, and tells Mabel he doesn't want to discuss it with her. Mabel continues to pester him with questions anyways. "Did you remember to eat her out? Is she a squirter? Does she have cute nipples? Does she shave?... *does the carpet match the drapes?*"

3rd panel has a label saying something like "a few days later." The pines are at the breakfast table, and Stan is holding up a check. "I can't believe the Northwests paid this much! I should have put you into forced labor weeks ago, kid."

Dipper says glumly, poking at his oatmeal/cereal whatever. "Well don't get used to it, I already paid off my dues and Pacifica's parents say I'm not welcome there."

4th panel is close up on Stan's face looking sly "Unless..."

5th Stan is in his car, plowing though the gates/driving donuts on the Northwest's lawn, breaking statues and sending panicked peacocks all over the place. Pacifica's parents are fuming and saying stuff about how "that boy" of theirs is going to be working here all summer, with Pacifica trying not to look too pleased.

6th panel is inside the car and Dipper thanking Stan.

Happy ending. :3