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  1. Hi there
  2. My name is FoodLovingPanda and I will be reviewing you.
  3. This review will be divided into three sections: Terrain, Organics and Structure so let us begin
  4. TERRAIN:
  5. Your terrain is really lovely, it has nice dynamic to it and block diversity, however i would like you to add that block variety to the water as well. Don't leave it all dirt as it does not look the best, but rather lazy.
  6. ORGANICS:
  7. Your organics are decent. I love the simplistic approach that you used for the bees. Your tree is good, but it seems a bit flat at the roots area. Try to give it some depth.
  8. STRUCTURE:
  9. Your structure is good so that it is passable for the first rank.
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  11. The biggest problem that i have with your plot is that it seems empty. There is so much space left on it, especially on the lower part of the plot. Try adding another structure or something to fill it in.
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  13. Have fun building
  14. -FoodLovingPanda
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