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  1. Hi there
  2. My name is FoodLovingPanda and I will be reviewing you
  3. This review will be divided into three sections: Terrain, Organics and Structure so let us begin.
  4. TERRAIN:
  5. The terrain you have above water is really really nice. It has a lovely dynamic and well shaped. I would suggest adding some block variety in some places. However i would want to see some underwater terrain as well. Add some depth to it, block variety and texture. If you were making a lagoon dont leave the bottom of the sea grass, it is just too odd.
  6. ORGANICS:
  7. Your trees are going to need a bit work on them. Try adding some roots to the trees to make it seem like they are more stable. Also I would suggest you to add some branches on the lower part of the tree and by that make it look more natural. The way the treetop is right now it seems very basic. Try making more advanced. You are going for blaze after all.
  8. STRUCTURE:
  9. I like your structure, however in the future do not use the same detailing pattern over and over again as it makes the structure repetative.
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  11. The biggest setback you have on your plot is that it is very empty. Almost half of it is covered in water and there is nothing in it. As for the boat it is really hard to make proper boats on plots this small. If you still want to have it all covered in water add something to fill in the plot that is not a boat.
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  13. Have fun building
  14. -FoodLovingPanda
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